Deciding range of life enjoy life better is one of life's more difficult choises. One may opt for child, or older. In my opinion, the young people is more advantageous due to more energy and more supporter. In this following essay, I will explain the issue furthor.
The first reason that I believe young people have more energy. The more energy is definited that they can do anything, which is the people want to do. Therefore, the young people can go to anywhere and eat a lot of food as they wanted, and have happiness of life more that the older. My own personal history is proof this. When I was young in my country in Thailand, I can play game with my friend, read a lot of book together and play football on the gound. So, I can enjoy life as a kid whenever I could. As a result of playing with friend, my child life it fullfilled of fun. For this reason, I think that young people can enjoy life more.
The second reason that I believe young prople enjoy life is having supporter as family. Kid is taked care by their family, then all the activities of kid is supported by them. Moreover, kid does not have a lot of problem in life, they can play everything as they feel incredible. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When my youngest sister want to go to oversea like Japan, my family always support her to go there. So, she can do everthing in the international country. Accordingly, I believe that child can enjoy a life more older.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the young life enjoy life more. This is because more energy and more supporter.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun book seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of books'.
Suggestion: a lot of books
...d, I can play game with my friend, read a lot of book together and play football on the gound...
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Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
...ed by them. Moreover, kid does not have a lot of problem in life, they can play everything as th...
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Line 5, column 538, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'older' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: older
..., I believe that child can enjoy a life more older. In conclusion, I strongly believe t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44520547945 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43822148312 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472602739726 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2265210174 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.8095238095 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9047619048 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61904761905 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350693930534 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121458762261 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106674511706 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246446238561 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717506003641 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 11.7677419355 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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