The truth is a really important in our lives; any relationship is to be strong forever should depend on the truth. The issue whether always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relation or not arouse much controversy among people with different ages, different perspectives, and different cultures. Some contend think that telling the truth hurts the people. However, I completely agree that telling the truth can make you trustworthy person. And it is a rewarding virtue, it makes you respect from others.
To begin with, it makes you trustworthy person. It is important telling the truth even though, sometimes it hurts the other. But temporary suffering from the truth can far outweigh the long and drawn out a subtle agony of living in lying. There is maxima saying " the truth does not cost you anything but lie cost you everything" that reflects to me that telling a lie once put you in doubt from the others and all your truth become questionable. Therefore, any relation should depend on the truth since it helps us to know which person is good or not, and who one will be beside you in any hardship. If the people trust in you, you will develop a good relationship, which remains with forever. For example, I have been married from 10 years ago. I and my husband never hide anything on each other. We love each other. Our marriage life is good avatar for anyone, till now our life like the first month in our marriage life, never hide anything, and tell each other the truth. Therefore, we trust in each other that is why our life is full of happiness.
In addition to, the trustworthy, it is rewarding virtue, it makes you respect from all people. It makes you to get more popularity among the social cycle. Some people lie in order to achieve better consequence. Those people are considered as selfish, thus, the other will avoid contacting them and not respecting them. There is proverb saying that “there are a certain consideration or factors that everyone should takes into his account loyalty, truth, and understanding" that reflects the importance of the truth in our lives. For instance, I worked in compounding pharmacy last year. The company started new business depend on the quality of their medication, therefore, we should care about cleaning and the quality of our medication. I remember that my friend compounded medication, after she finished, we found a lot of dust in it. I was scare to tell the supervisor since we will lose money if we got ride of it at the same time I scare about my friend from loosing her job but I told her the situation and she appreciated me, and at the same time my friend did not loose her job.
As all things considered, even if the truth might hurt the others feeling but the merits of the truth far outweighs the demerits. it helps the person to respect from other at the same time he can develop a strength relationship with the others.
Essay evaluation report
I have been married from 10 years ago.
I have been married for 10 years .
I married 10 years ago.
from loosing her job
from losing her job
Sentence: There is proverb saying that there are a certain consideration or factors that everyone should takes into his account loyalty, truth, and understanding' that reflects the importance of the truth in our lives.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to should and takes
Sentence: The company started new business depend on the quality of their medication, therefore, we should care about cleaning and the quality of our medication.
Description: The fragment business depend on is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace depend with verb, past participle
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 26 15
No. of Words: 514 350
No. of Characters: 2342 1500
No. of Different Words: 234 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.761 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.556 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.47 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 144 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.769 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.946 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.615 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.302 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.422 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.246 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
ideas are great but work on
ideas are great but work on grammar.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The truth is a really important in our l...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., it makes you respect from others. To begin with, it makes you trustworthy ...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'There are maxima'?
Suggestion: There are maxima
... out a subtle agony of living in lying. There is maxima saying ' the truth does not cost y...
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Line 3, column 573, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a one'.
Suggestion: who is a one
...o know which person is good or not, and who one will be beside you in any hardship. If ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s why our life is full of happiness. In addition to, the trustworthy, it is r...
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Line 5, column 931, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nce we will lose money if we got ride of it at the same time I scare about my fri...
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Line 5, column 1016, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... from loosing her job but I told her the situation and she appreciated me, and at...
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Line 5, column 1091, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... and at the same time my friend did not loose her job. As all things consid...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ime my friend did not loose her job. As all things considered, even if the tr...
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Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...f the truth far outweighs the demerits. it helps the person to respect from other ...
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Line 7, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... strength relationship with the others.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.197255574614 0.229887763892 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.164665523156 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0668953687822 0.0866891130778 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0497427101201 0.046263068375 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.106346483705 0.0685040099705 155% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.109777015437 0.118717715034 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0360205831904 0.0351676179071 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6742707432 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0154373927959 0.0309702414327 50% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00171526586621 0.00188951952338 91% => OK
Determiners: 0.102915951973 0.0887237588012 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0205831903945 0.0209618222197 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0120068610635 0.0139019557991 86% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2974.0 2387.08602151 125% => OK
No of words: 515.0 408.028673835 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77475728155 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.302912621359 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21359223301 0.251872472559 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141747572816 0.174417080927 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.100970873786 0.112833075102 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6742707432 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47572815534 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.5459867843 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6684587814 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0740740741 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3065089408 48.84282405 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.148148148 120.699889404 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0740740741 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.644075263715 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.54480286738 198% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 40.433297375 45.7405998639 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.06951871658 1.45489161554 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421853463615 0.300154397459 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.135042864099 0.103427244359 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0938645441657 0.0752933317313 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.423774579231 0.497263757937 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181850439244 0.151897553556 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148065307127 0.114077575197 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922902917692 0.0781384742642 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.487636693296 0.336927656856 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.051421906837 0.067059652881 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.336452762153 0.210909579961 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731943628139 0.0618886996521 118% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8870967742 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 18.0 8.42114695341 214% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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