Integrity and telling the truth is one of the important considerations in any kind of relationships. I try to keep my relationship in its best form by having integrity and being honest, this is the thing that I expect my friends, so I myself have to do it first. Our relationships are worthy and valuable; the most important thing which causes it devastation and injury is falsity. I never want to use the most valuable aspects of my life which are my relationships, so I try to consider truth telling to my contacts and mates. Maybe we can have our relationships by falsity, but only for a while.
Individuals’ impacts in our life is too clear, we are going to improve more by the people we are surrounded by. “Never call me a self-made man. If I could gain everything I have now, it is because of my surrounds and my relationships” said, Arnold. He has been considering telling the truth and he could have had more friends. his friends were the biggest cause of his successes, so stay honest with all and win everything at all.
Integrity is the way to be happy. Happiness is the life important sector. The people whom they are honest all the time, they are happy and cheerful all the time. If you are dishonest in any relationship in your life, you are always afraid of being shameful by the contacts awareness in that case the mind is busy with this trick. When our mind is not relaxing and busy with negative thoughts we can’t be happy, instead we are sad always.
I end up my speeches by telling that if you want to be trusted, always tell the truth and be authentic with your actions. The only people who are mad at you for speaking the truth are those people who are living a lie.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, then, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50641025641 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84969605171 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50641025641 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7023956949 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7058823529 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64705882353 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167861518789 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057236302497 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608157264278 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106946453908 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410581566944 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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