Friendship is very important relationship in any ones life. We are most likely to be influenced by our friends than anybody else. In childhood we frolic with them and in dotage we ramble with them. I believe that making new friends is as important as keeping old ones.
Firstly, we get exposed to new ideas when we befriend new people. For instance, when I was in high school I had local friends with whom I grew up. We had similar tastes in music and movies. We were only exposed to bollywood music and drama. We didnot know any english songs. When I joined my university, I was exposed to a whole new range of music and TV shows by my new friends there. It was then that was exposed to different genres like drama, thrillers and comedy. Previously, in high school I was used to watching family drama alone. Today I only watch thrillers. Thus, my new friends at the university played an important role in introducing me to new entertainment.
Secondly, it is difficult to be friends with people who live far. Though communication does not seem a problem with mobile phones and internet, physical distance imposes certain restrictions. After graduation my friends and I started working for companies in different cities. Although, we do communicate with each other, I can only rely on my colleagues at work for any physical help that I need. Recently, when I shifted to a new locality, I had only my new friends to thank for, who helped me move. Also when I face problems regarding work, its only my new friends who can help me as they understand the problem better. They know the circumstances I am in. Whereas college friends can not provide expedient advice as they have limited knowledge of my situation. Thus distance plays a key role in maintaining relationship. It is highly unlikely that we will be staying the same place for all our life,making new friends becomes important.
Thus, I believe one should give importance to making new friends. Each of our friends brings a new idea with her, a new philosophy, a new way of living. Making new friends exposes us to these new ideas. Because it is unlikely that we and our friends live in the same city for eternity, it is expedient to make new friends where ever we are.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'whereas', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.198198198198 0.229887763892 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.175675675676 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103603603604 0.0866891130778 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0563063063063 0.046263068375 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.126126126126 0.0685040099705 184% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.103603603604 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0405405405405 0.0351676179071 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70318581486 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0292792792793 0.0309702414327 95% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0472972972973 0.0887237588012 53% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0112612612613 0.0209618222197 54% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0225225225225 0.0139019557991 162% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2237.0 2387.08602151 94% => OK
No of words: 396.0 408.028673835 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64898989899 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255050505051 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.138888888889 0.174417080927 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111111111111 0.112833075102 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70318581486 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525252525253 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 58.5052818036 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 14.1428571429 20.5533526081 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6387045284 48.84282405 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8928571429 120.699889404 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 20.5533526081 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.644075263715 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 39.6479076479 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 0.955974842767 1.45489161554 66% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308545689639 0.300154397459 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0858277270724 0.103427244359 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0778943425517 0.0752933317313 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.400040392297 0.497263757937 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.133791142454 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989616891147 0.114077575197 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737244932361 0.0781384742642 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.330752539486 0.336927656856 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0562531291511 0.067059652881 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227974613925 0.210909579961 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500664397837 0.0618886996521 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8870967742 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 18.0 8.42114695341 214% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.