TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There are myriad factors or considerations which take into that keep your old friends is more important than is to make new friends. As far as I concerned according to the following reasons and from my personal experiences, I am of the conviction that making new friends is more important than keeping old friends. Someone can concisely wight the pros and cons of each. The reason will be explored in the following essay.
The first exquisite reason which gives adherences to my viewpoint with experience, people need to change with time old friend is an important part of life but they will not always there with you because after some time everyone has their college, job and different goal in life which need to be done so there is a slight chance that you and your friend will be together and keep in touch with them is great but giving them more important than making new friend is wrong because both cannot always be together making new friend is more important my experience is the best example for this after my 12th I got an engineering college which is far from my home and I was about to lose my friend because most of my friend decided to stay together, so when alone in new town so I need to make a new friend which is necessary I can wait for my old friend which in another town if give my old friend more important than I can not make new ones.
Apart, from the fact mention above one should consider another sublet point meticulously pertaining regarding obtaining with huge experiences. The noteworthy refreshing statistic revealed by a recent social research conducted in my country show that the majority of people are agreed in the fact that people to need to there friends change there over time this is important for many reasons this help people to progress in their life, to shade more light on this issue according to the research done by Delhi University people who did not want to change in his life and don't want to change there old house, town, friends tend to be less in successful as they feel less happy in life because of the lack of friends.
Admittedly, someone can justification another side by saying old friend is important because of they with you since childhood and you and they have a great moment in school colleges that time can to come back so there is your vintage friend, but I still affirm to that no need to forget about the old friend, not make them more important to your current friend have problem.
In summary, by all the affirmation above one should consider that make new friends in more necessary now than past

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
... did not want to change in his life and dont want to change there old house, town, f...
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Suggestion: because they
... side by saying old friend is important because of they with you since childhood and you and th...
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... friends in more necessary now than past

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, so, still, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2112.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57142857143 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41135255931 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430735930736 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.1344086022 253% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 279.987874517 48.9658058833 572% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 234.666666667 100.406767564 234% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.3333333333 20.6045352989 249% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324904446454 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156601699171 0.076458572812 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114197389725 0.0737576698707 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20797838336 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958792857337 0.0645574589148 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.8 11.7677419355 219% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 58.1214874552 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.1575268817 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.0537634409 223% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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