There are myriad factor and consideration which take into that importance of sports and social activities and classes and libraries are equal so they should receive the same financial support at universities and colleges. As far as I concerned according to the following reason and from my personal experiences I am of the conviction that both sports, social activities and classes and libraries should receive equal financial support. Someone can concisely wight the pros and cons of each the reason for my will be explored in the following essay.
The first exquisite reason which gives adherence to my viewpoint with experience is that sports and social activities are important because when student go to the universities and colleges they don't only go for study they want to gain experience about life to make them fit sports is needed because when student is fit only than they can study better and for social activities help them in my way which the help of it they can be more open with people which can help them in future job to be open with other employs. My experiences is the best example for this in my college time I am not very open type person I hesitate to speak with people so I try to avoid every one by reading books and because of my shy nature I did not go to play sports when I get job this became my big problem I can not talk to my other co-workers I take me so much time to learn this I really wish If my college makes us focus on this other activity.
Apart from the fact mention above one should consider another subtle point meticulously pretending to be regarding with huge experience the noteworthy refreshing statistic revealed by a recent social research conducted in my country in which majority of people agree that sports and social activities are as much as important as study and libraries in college and universities to shade more light in this according to the research done in Delhi University that student that much in to sports are more good in class too because with the help of sports student is fit and when he fit he can study much more and sport and student which are in social activities are more successful in comparison to how to don't into it as this makes good impression in people.
Admittedly, Someone can justification to another side by saying that college and universities are for study and sports, social activities can distract the student from the study this should not be count as equal and not give equal financial support but I still affirm that both sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries.
In summary, by all the affirmation above one should consider that universities and colleges in need to give equal financial support for both sports, social activities and classes and libraries because both are important for the student.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, regarding, so, still, apart from, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2339.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 495.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72525252525 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60229467151 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.383838383838 0.524837075471 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 753.3 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.1344086022 303% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 193.754838649 48.9658058833 396% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 292.375 100.406767564 291% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.875 20.6045352989 300% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264170122365 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168803331226 0.076458572812 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110291206736 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201982617411 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859485385224 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.8 11.7677419355 270% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.02 58.1214874552 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 10.1575268817 255% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.0537634409 263% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.247311828 254% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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