i agree with that it is amazing to keep those friends which are being with us for a long period of time in comparison to make new friends.i support this idea for two main possible reasons which i will explore in the following essay. first, as we already knew being with marvelous old friends would change the angle's life of the person to positive way and happiness due to their honesty, patience, and loyalty. secondly, old communication with friends would leave an outstanding relationship with full of positive memories behind.
to begin with, old friends would understand any circumstances of his or her friend and also would try to put dots to those issues of their colleague by helping them simultaneously. for instances, if an issue begin in the working area and if we could not be able to handle that by itself virtually we will ask helping from friends, like wise i faced with a problem last month and it was seems difficult for me to over come with that challenge. i asked someone who was in touch with me for a long time until now. he helped me out very easily in that knot.
in addition, stay in touch with old friends leave splendid impressions behind that obviously would stuck in mind for too long time. for example, last year i wanted someone to celebrate my birthday but i did not inform anyone of my classmates. although, i made new friends though but nobody remembered my birthday date. when i came out from class my old friend abruptly make me surprised and i shocked. after few mints i asked him what is the matter? and he gently replied that today is your birth date. it determine that old friends really gives someone happiness and unforgettable moment.
to sum up, old friends are undoubtedly amazing and excellent. i feel this way for two main reasons. first, they will help and make you happy in certain conditions. moreover, they will gives you a lot of indelible memories.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.646884273 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57852062044 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569732937685 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0155726835 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.5376344086 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196533841305 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585075485741 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497612981068 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120109790047 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552083944126 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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