In twenty years with the development of the technology, people have accomplished many great achievements to make world better place to live. the issue whether in twenty years later there will be fewer cars in use than there are today or not aroused much controversy among people with different perspective, different ages, and different culture. Some contend that there will be more cars in use In twenty years later than today since it more convenient for the people. However, I completely agree that there will be fewer cars in use than today since the government will try to solve the most global environmental issue as pollution which caused by using the automobile, and Using the public transportation helps the people to save time and more convenient than the automobile.
The government increases their awareness regarding the most global issue that has a negative impact on the environment such as the pollution; therefore, it keeps spending on improving public transportation to assist in setting down the world- wide environmental problems that threaten the lives of all species living in the world. Using more automobile, out of carbon dioxide existing in the atmosphere, about 60% are man-made caused by the automobiles, and they have significantly effect on the environment. According to a report from New York times, The global number of car exceed one billion, the vast majority of which run on the road every day, releasing a fair volume of man-made exhaust. When man-made exhausts accumulate in the air, they can be lethal, destroying ozone layer that plays an important role in preventing harmful radiation from the sun, all of that leads to destroying the globe. Thus, the government enhances their awareness regarding this issue and will start to improve the public transportation, and encourage people to use it. Regarding to the report that I mention before, it shows some statistical data that indicate the globe would annually lower the current rate of the greenhouse emitted by automobile up to 20% if the people decreased the number of driving a car on their daily basis.
In addition to solving the environmental problem, using the public transportation helps the people to attend their work on the time without any effort since they can know bus schedule or subway schedule. For example, Last year, I worked in Manhattan, it is hard to find park over there, and a lot of traffic, I tried once to drive my car, I reached my work late and felt so exhausted, I could not be able to work good, Thus, I decided to take subway every day, I used to reach my work on time, and without effort. Anyone does not have to worry about the traffic at the same time anyone can do what he likes to do in the public transportation such as reading some books, listening to music, and listening to news, all of that helps anyone to relax, and can be able to focus on his work and shares in the development of the company, so, it is convenient to use it. Moreover, using the public transportation helps the people to save money as the people do not have to worry about the insurance, and gas, as the result, they can save money to get some fun.
As all things considered, while it is true that using your private car more convenient since you will not have to worry about extreme hot of summer or extreme cold in the winter, but when it comes to alleviating the most global issue like the pollution, saving time, and saving money, it worthy to use the cars less.
Essay evaluation report
to make world better place to live.
to make world a better place to live.
since it more convenient for the people
since it is more convenient for the people
government will try to solve the most global environmental issue as pollution which caused by using the automobile
government will try to solve the most global environmental issues such as pollution which has caused by using the automobile
it worthy to use the cars less.
it is worthy to use the cars less.
Sentence: Using more automobile, out of carbon dioxide existing in the atmosphere, about 60 are man-made caused by the automobiles, and they have significantly effect on the environment.
Description: The fragment have significantly effect is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace significantly with adjective
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Words: 602 350 //the introduction is too long. follow this user by three reasons but less examples:
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 602 350
No. of Characters: 2801 1500
No. of Different Words: 270 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.953 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.653 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.615 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 168 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 113 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 83 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 66 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 43 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.526 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.372 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.586 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.16 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In twenty years with the development of ...
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Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...nts to make world better place to live. the issue whether in twenty years later the...
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Line 1, column 680, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich caused by using the automobile, and Using the public transportation helps t...
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Line 1, column 713, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le, and Using the public transportation helps the people to save time and more c...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...more convenient than the automobile. The government increases their awareness...
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Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'effected'.
Suggestion: effected
...utomobiles, and they have significantly effect on the environment. According to a repo...
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Line 3, column 1325, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of driving a car on their daily basis. In addition to solving the environm...
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Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[5]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
... time without any effort since they can know bus schedule or subway schedule. For ex...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...they can save money to get some fun. As all things considered, while it is tr...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'in addition', 'such as', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21954887218 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.165413533835 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0796992481203 0.0866891130778 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0436090225564 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0496240601504 0.0685040099705 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117293233083 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0496240601504 0.0351676179071 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69059971542 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0466165413534 0.0309702414327 151% => OK
Particles: 0.0015037593985 0.00188951952338 80% => OK
Determiners: 0.108270676692 0.0887237588012 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0195488721805 0.0209618222197 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0135338345865 0.0139019557991 97% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3502.0 2387.08602151 147% => OK
No of words: 602.0 408.028673835 148% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81727574751 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95335121839 4.48200974243 111% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.295681063123 0.338922669872 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.197674418605 0.251872472559 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.151162790698 0.174417080927 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112956810631 0.112833075102 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69059971542 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46511627907 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.6539522311 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 40.1333333333 20.5533526081 195% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5382351285 48.84282405 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 233.466666667 120.699889404 193% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.1333333333 20.5533526081 195% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.866666666667 0.644075263715 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 59.9007751938 45.7405998639 131% => OK
Elegance: 1.49418604651 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308693359238 0.300154397459 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.22469602931 0.103427244359 217% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0983039591206 0.0752933317313 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.677927472659 0.497263757937 136% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131318119107 0.151897553556 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164504358317 0.114077575197 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878363264986 0.0781384742642 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.496011904823 0.336927656856 147% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0422105395174 0.067059652881 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242462472241 0.210909579961 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111617293455 0.0618886996521 180% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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