TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Folktales heard from my parents about their parents are the evidence of their hard and inconvenient life; they have spent almost seventy years before. Today, this evidence bears a controversy. Although many people believe that today lives have become more complex and difficult because of technology, I strongly conclude that life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children. Advancement in the field of technology and science has been proved blessings for a present generation. There are some incredible ways both are helping us to breathe easier and live sm...

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Folktales heard from my parents about th...
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... us to breathe easier and live smarter. Firstly, modern technology has made a bi...
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... nicer and easier compare to the past. Secondly, today, an advent of internet a...
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...on, get the latest information and so on.. Few decades before, certain concepts we...
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...possible for us because of technology. Lastly, people in past had a very diffic...
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...ines, powerful multispectral antibiotics, latest invasive procedures like laparoscopy, a...
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...ife than to a life of our forefathers. In a nutshell, by taking all into accoun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 13.8261648746 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3030.0 1977.66487455 153% => OK
No of words: 573.0 407.700716846 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28795811518 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89258810929 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85689300971 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 312.0 212.727598566 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544502617801 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 949.5 618.680645161 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.1212335596 48.9658058833 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.2 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.92 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153847069173 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443194064973 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528294444707 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919757804463 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512457765973 0.0645574589148 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 151.0 86.8835125448 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Write the essay in 30 minutes. We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 28 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 573 350
No. of Characters: 2927 1500
No. of Different Words: 300 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.893 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.108 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.735 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 219 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 165 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 109 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 73 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.92 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.384 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.48 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.281 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.47 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.106 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5