A person should never make an important decision alone.

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A person should never make an important decision alone.

Life is very important and precious and any person’s future is affected by a decision taken at any point of life, hence it is crucial for every person to make fair and correct decision in life. Although many people never consider the opinion of other folks, I believe that a person should not make an important decision alone.

Firstly, it is crucial to make correct choices and to take appropriate decisions in order to avoid mistakes in life. In the matter of healthcare decision about any family member or our own self, this is very important as all persons may not have the enough knowledge about the procedures and its consequences. In this scenario, it is wise to take an advice of the persons who might have faced the exact situations in life, so that by taking the proper decision on time, life can be made better or saved.
Secondly, sometimes in certain professional situations, it is good that an individual should never make an important decision alone. For example, in the business or at the job, group decisions are mandatory to have the better future of a business or of clients. In India, when I was working as a physical therapist at a very big hospital, during that time in the decision when to discharge the patient, I all the time used to consult other team members like a social worker and an occupational therapist about the mental health and vocational training of patients, so that I can take the important decision wisely looking to all the aspects of patients’ progress. And our combined judgments have made patients’ after-discharge life confident and successful.

Thirdly, at different phases of life, people are required to make various selections. Specifically, in a study life, pupils need to declare a major, select university, career, profession, job and finally later on marriage partner. Young people have less knowledge and experience compare to parents and other family members. Hence, these folks should consider the words of all seniors in the family, so that they can avoid mistakes in life and without wasting time can attain their goals.

Finally, it is true to say, in certain situations, people may waste their time and receive bad or inappropriate advice by some other folks in life. But, looking to all aforementioned factors and reasons, I strongly suggest that consideration of experience, knowledge, and opinion of parents, seniors, and co-workers will definitely help a person to make an important decision correctly and wisely.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...me, life can be made better or saved. Secondly, sometimes in certain professio...
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...wasting time can attain their goals. Finally, it is true to say, in cert...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2095.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06038647343 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86993117268 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495169082126 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7491693418 48.9658058833 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.666666667 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392723328571 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144731404223 0.076458572812 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.178501167852 0.0737576698707 242% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238724576409 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150530772562 0.0645574589148 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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