Should your government place a tax on the junk food and fatty snacks?
It is an undisputable fact that since past few years furor of an eating junk and fatty food has been increased excessively. People prefer to eat fast and fatty food without thinking about its long term effects. I firmly support the idea of keeping a tax on junk and fatty foods by the government. In my view, this action will decrease the consumption of such foods in the country in the following ways.
First of all, taxation on junk food will increase the cost of these foods, so that people will not prefer to buy them. Therefore, people will have health benefits as junk and fatty food contain lots of calories in a small volume. These foods contain more saturated fat which is not good for our heart. Candy bars and granola bars are high in sugars, so childhood obesity and adolescence diabetics are increasing day by day in the world. Working people eat pizza, burger, pretzel, sandwich and hot dog in their lunch every day, as they don’t have time to cook food at home; because of this, they suffer from obesity, hypertension and type 2 diabetes. Therefore, the tax on the fast and fatty food will force these people not to eat outside and finally, they will start eating home cooked food, which is good for their health.
Second, it’s not just the chemicals in fast food that affect the environment; it’s the whole chain of production. First, in the preparation of fast food, lots of meat is used. This meat is produced at factory farms, which contribute to global warming more than all of our cars put together. Second, many of their products are transported long distances, before they reach at the store, further increasing their impact on air quality. They also have a negative effect on water quality, as pathogens, hormones, drugs, and the fertilizers they use tend to seep into surrounding groundwater, potentially causing outbreaks of waterborne illness, fish kills, and other hazards.
Fast food places also tend to use a lot of packaging. This overuse of wrappers, straws, bags, boxes, and plastic ware is the biggest source of urban litter in the world. So, tax on fast food will increase their prize, and hence less consumption will reduce the production of these foods, finally it will save our environment.
Finally, In order to save money one avoids buying fast food from outside. People will start buying groceries regularly from the Food max and other stores and will prepare food at home, it would save money and homemade food is always better than fast food. Moreover, by putting a tax on fast and fatty food, a government would generate more income which would be used to provide other facilities like, education, environment saving projects and on transportation.
In a conclusion, the government should place a tax on fast and fatty food in order to reduce health problems mentioned above, to save the environment and to generate more income to the government.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 02
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 497 350
No. of Characters: 2322 1500
No. of Different Words: 244 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.722 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.672 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.408 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 141 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.591 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.895 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.591 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.322 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.529 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.114 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, moreover, second, so, therefore, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2421.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8810483871 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54937503181 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510080645161 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 729.9 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1503213274 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.045454545 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13636363636 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267180810064 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909149402524 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828416055262 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167783156668 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874844797296 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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