It's obvious that human life has changed over the time. People have to deal with new challenges in each century. Some believe that life wasn't difficult in ancient years as it is in the modern time, others opposes this notion. I am of the conviction that it is more convenient in today's life than the previous years. I think this way because of the two following reasons.
To begin with, today it's easier to follow your dreams than it was later. There are a lot of universities and colleges around the world which provides facilities for the students to learn what they need for their future plans. In addition, the development of technology has helped individuals to have access to online resources and attend courses they may need. My grandfather's experience is a good example of this. When he was a child, he had a dream of being a sailor. Although the academic places were all occupied in the capital of country, my grandfather's family used to live in a small village around Tabriz city of Iran which was far away from the Tehran as the capital city. In those days, it wasn't possible to travel to another city for college education. As the result, he never could reach his goal which was his childhood dream.
Secondly, people of last decades were struggling with health related issues that don't exist these days. In recent years, the worldwide vaccination of the children in infantile years has eradicated some of microbiological life-threatening diseases. Moreover, enhanced medical and surgical methods have increased the rate of treatment. There are also increasing number of new drugs, which would be beneficial for therapeutic goals. For instance, during the time when Lewy Pastor was born in France, small pox was a major cause of death in whole world. People struggled with health issues related to the contamination with small pox bacteria. Then, after Pastor explored the procedure of vaccination, the mortality rate reduced dramatically.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that living in current world is much easier than the older years. This is because people have more chance to find the way through their dreams and have higher level of public health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96164383562 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65475635072 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594520547945 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7897620488 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3181818182 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5909090909 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31818181818 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158606570791 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450738889101 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594691420101 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879436945891 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02446964184 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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