Lifestyle has changed much in these years, and it has sensational effects on their lives. These changes have been caused to lifestyle; therefore, quality of life is better in some conditions and worse in other conditions. From my point of view, when comparing the pros and cons of today children’s life and past children’s life, I think, nowadays, people have better quality in their lives than past. As a result, they have a comfortable life, and I am going to explain it for two reasons suggested below.
As a first reason, increasing in knowledge at curing diseases has a tremendous effect on people health. In the past, due to lacking health knowledge, many children died in childhood and the population did not increase much. They underlay horrible epidemic diseases, many of which could have not cured easily, owing to neglecting hygiene among ordinary people. Nowadays, by increasing information and gaining knowledge especially about health, people can obtain the benefit of health and cure faster than years ago. For example, I heard some stories from my grandmother, which she explained many problems faced in her children’s lives, especially about health and hygiene, and one-third of population approximately died in childhood time on those days. As you can see, knowledge of health progress perfectly and transform life to be better and comfortable than past.
As a second reason, another thing affected much in human life is technology, obtaining a comfortable situation. I explain some technologies affecting much at this time such as construction, connection, and transportation. By progressing construction, people are able to build bigger, better, more stable dwelling than past and many of these dwellings are comfortable than before. The connection is akin to transportation also faster than before and you can use the internet to connect to other countries immediately and travel below than a complete day. Nonetheless, in the past, none of them was improved analogous to these days. As a result, you can see how technology has changed life to be suitable.
In sum, nowadays, life is become more comfortable and better than past and helped people to live longer and easier; not only increasing in health curing but also advancing technology leads to having a comfortable life than past especially in comparison to grandparents childhood time. People should improve their knowledge and help each other to have a perfect life day after day.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nonetheless, second, so, therefore, third, well, another thing, for example, i think, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26515151515 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99946429254 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525252525253 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6005697976 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.833333333 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146723622512 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499260903683 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426815354178 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102680427722 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272983304877 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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