In the age of technology, we witness a tremendous change in knowledge of people than the past. Some people think it is more appropriate to be an expert in one academic subject, many other believe every human should have a wide knowledge and information in different types of academic subject. Definitely, I agree with the latter group because I believe that by having wide range different types of academic knowledge we can teach in different types of lessons, making more money and become famous .My argument for this point is listed as follows.
For one thing, some academic people are teaching in different types of lessons at university .In some universities, some professors are more active in academic knowledge .For example, professor King of Harvard university teaches three types of academic subjects and he has a wide range of knowledge in mathematics, electrical engineering and so on .Moreover, these people not only teaches in one university, they can teach in several universities. So, these people have lots of opportunities for teaching.
Second, in many universities some professors who are teaching in different types of academic subject, they can make more money than other professors. Our situation is very particular because people especially professional people like professors and experts who are communicating to academic knowledge need to mak more money just by teaching because they do not have any other job and occupation. Although they spending by more time for teaching making less money, they can go different universities for teaching . For instant, a professor who has knowledge in mathematics, he can teach in some branch of physics.
Third, the most important effect of teaching and having a wide range of academic knowledge is to become famous .For example, the student at universities tries to take a course by professors who have two main points first ,have lots of knowledge and second ,very famous professors or some student for taking project try to correspond with foreign famous professor. Additionally, by having wide different type of academic knowledge some professor and expert become famous in all around the world.
To summarize it, I am of the perception that, although it needs spend lots of time to learn different types of academic knowledge, it has many advantages such as teaching types of lessons, making more money and become famous. Therefore, the more knowledge in the wide range of academic subjects people are, the more qualities and advantages they are.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'for example', 'such as', 'for one thing']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255605381166 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.141255605381 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.141255605381 0.0866891130778 163% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0336322869955 0.046263068375 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0403587443946 0.0685040099705 59% => OK
Prepositions: 0.150224215247 0.118717715034 127% => OK
Participles: 0.0403587443946 0.0351676179071 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86894782824 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0179372197309 0.0309702414327 58% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0695067264574 0.0887237588012 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0134529147982 0.0209618222197 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00896860986547 0.0139019557991 65% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2528.0 2387.08602151 106% => OK
No of words: 407.0 408.028673835 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.2113022113 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.390663390663 0.338922669872 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.289926289926 0.251872472559 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2457002457 0.174417080927 141% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.159705159705 0.112833075102 142% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86894782824 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434889434889 0.524397521467 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.301301139 59.2087087015 78% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6684587814 63% => OK
Sentence length: 31.3076923077 20.5533526081 152% => OK
Sentence length SD: 108.789574857 48.84282405 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.461538462 120.699889404 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3076923077 20.5533526081 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.769230769231 0.644075263715 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.54480286738 234% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 60.3003213003 45.7405998639 132% => OK
Elegance: 2.07291666667 1.45489161554 142% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277356306617 0.300154397459 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.170294853871 0.103427244359 165% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0604016230546 0.0752933317313 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.651518131615 0.497263757937 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.172000453901 0.151897553556 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13614466639 0.114077575197 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694136843134 0.0781384742642 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.390264105159 0.336927656856 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.069207321218 0.067059652881 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202091070271 0.210909579961 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476803238312 0.0618886996521 77% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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