The travel across the world is much easier today, thanks to advancements in different types of transportation. A predictable debate question arises upon the fact that whether traveling in own country is more beneficial or traveling to foreign countries. I prefer to travel within my country, in my humble opinion, while there is much more to see in own country, people benefit more from travelling in their own countries.
The first benefit of traveling within is to learn the history of one's own nation. Although some people might suggest that visiting foreign countries allow them to witness different cultures, it is more important for a person to understand their own than learning the rest of the world. Even there are remarkable differences between localized cultures over country, actually, people are still able to witness different cultures in their own country. Moreover, virtually every country is national where one crutial consideration in society is to admire their past. Traveling within the native country, as a result, contributes a lot about the history of the country. Turkey is a good example because of the excavations of ancient settlements when founded in the neolithic age. Thus, a Turkish person benefits more from visiting the exhibitions of the excavation sites to learn how was the ancient life in their country.
The other benefit is relatively cheap transportation. Conceptually, to travel to a foreign country is requires further costs, such as buying a plane ticket, since international traveling is expensive. In other word, tickets for domestic flights are affordable than international ones. Besides, extra money for traveling among countries cannot be regarded as a benefit. For example, people whose salary is low and are not capable of purchasing a comfortable holiday trip to a foreign country, however, with the same salary, they can afford a holiday trip in their country with similar standards. In the fact that traveling within the country is a benefit because those people is not necessary to spend a lot of money. Consequently, as expense of international flight tickets is higher than domestic ones, traveling within becomes a benefit.
In conclusion, learning the history of the native country is crutial for almost every country, for this reason, people benefit more from traveling in their own country rather than the rest of the world. Lastly, economical conditions of people play a critical role in expenses traveling issues, and it becomes more beneficial for low salaries to spend their holiday in their own country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, still, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2170.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2798053528 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86100557784 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469586374696 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7842707268 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.210526316 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6315789474 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35720720145 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120534666529 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761055242118 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251516779951 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493777230533 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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