Traveling can expand one's outlook, amplify one's experience and make many new friends. It could be a superb lesson in one's life. If I have/possess adequate time and money to plan my tour, I prefer foreign country tour.
Foreign life can serve various life experience and lifestyles which are hardly acquired in domestic life. In the identical social and environmental circumstance, people generally have relatively familiar and similar views and experience. The distinction is, if any, slight. If people do not go abroad, they can rarely obtain the refreshing ideas. For example, some people who come from highly industrialized countries with high welfare, tend to take the free healthcare and education for granted, but if they have a foreign tour in impoverished countries or regions where the food is almost far from enough, not to mention schooling, they can get a precious lesson: Cherish one's own life and help someone who need help.
Oversea travel can offer/provide/afford broader choices. As far as I know, some countries are as small as one common city of the United States. In such countries, if people refuse oversea journey, they have to repeat his footprints time and time again. In the other hand, some countries locate in some lonely islands without forest and all the fish comes from the sea, if these residents want to ride a horse in the plain or taste freshwater fish, they have to travel abroad .
Besides, the exotic landscape and custom are more curious and attractive than familiar ones. Generally speaking, people are curious, they prefer acquire purely refreshing experience, rather than relatively familiar or even well-known one. The foreign lifestyle, food and scenery are always far more different form one's domestic experience, which is the key factor to satisfy people's curiosity deeply.
In conclusion, foreign tour can afford more various life experience, more options, and satisfise people's curiosity highly. These advantages appeal to us. Needless to say, These are the contributing factors that more and more people would like to travel abroad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, so, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25149700599 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77386523793 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592814371257 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.6867920198 48.9658058833 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4444444444 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182748884991 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534745844412 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347663612696 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102280782116 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308869424792 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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