In my opinion now-days most companies try to sell their product and earn more profit and a strategy which companies use to rise their costumes is advertising. By advertising which is very considerable and useful now some company abuse of and make some unreal advertising. On the other hand some technology making this easier for companies to gi
First, producers only think about your selling and nothing another is important for them. They contracts with advertising companies to make attractive and almost untruth advertising. For example they try to hidden drawbacks of that product and instead say some lie about strengths. As an example a shampoo which is making of natural and chemical ingredients is advertising by companies that "this shampoo is make only by natural component." This sentence isn't truth and give false information about a product only for earning more money.
Second, some strategies even teaching in universities for some majors relevant to advertising is clearly for cheating consumers. For an example some sentences says "the most" "the best ... for ..." "the cheapest". This advertising use these sentences for psychological effects on people mind who watch those advertising.
Finally, exaggeration is an important study in advertising class in universities that students learn how use artistic tools to deception people.That artistic scenes make people mindless and excited them to buy as soon as possible for themselves profits. For an example, last year I saw an advertising in TV. On that advertising speaker repeat several times that this shampoo is a perfect one which is the only shampoo with natural component. Then show a beautiful woman with strong long hair. I became very excited to have that shampoo and days after watching that glamorous show I purchased one. After one month that i have used that shampoo in each bathing my hair damaged. When i went to doctor she said that shampoo composites of strong harmful chemicals which make hair beautiful temporally but harm them in after more than 2-3 times using.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
...e profit and a strategy which companies use to rise their costumes is advertising. ...
Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'contract'
...ing another is important for them. They contracts with advertising companies to make attr...
Line 2, column 465, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
... natural component.' This sentence isnt truth and give false information about ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 52.1666666667 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 692.0 1977.66487455 35% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 130.0 407.700716846 32% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32307692308 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37664837539 4.48103885553 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95308483779 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 212.727598566 37% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607692307692 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 618.680645161 35% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.302131228 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124721068784 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686481969529 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357261111426 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930336956465 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389515657477 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 86.8835125448 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.