Travelling is one of the most fun and beneficial thing in our life. Most people like to travel on their vacation. Some people prefer to travel within the same country cause it is safer and more affordable while some other people like to travel to a foreign country as it is more challenging and more fun for them. The issue of whether it is better to travel in your own country or to travel to foreign countries aroused controversy between people in different age group or with different cultures.
I personally agree that travelling to foreign countries is more beneficial for the following concerns.
First, When people travel to foreign countries they get to learn about different cultures, different food and new languages. This may eager them to learn a new specific language if they like it. Also, they get to do different activities than the ones they do at their own countries and develop new skills. For example, When people visit Egypt or any of the mid-east countries they can learn about camping in the desert or they can ride camels, these kinds of activities are not available in all the countries. They can also learn about the history of different countries by travelling to foreign countries such as the greek history or the old-egyptian history.
In addition, Travelling to a different country is more challenging which is a good think to develop our personalities. Living in a whole different country makes the person more responsible as he or she will have to do his or her own research as well as read more books if they got interested in the history or the culture of this foreign country which will have a good impact on their studying life . It is also a good chance to make new friends that you can visit every year. Also, If someone looking for immigration, travelling to foreign countries will help him to decide which country he would like to move in.
In conclusion, travelling within the same country might be good for short vacations as it is cheaper and faster to get there than travelling abroad, also some people think it is safer and more relaxing but still i disagree with that as i think it is more fun, challenging and more beneficial.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.179361179361 0.229887763892 78% => OK
Verbs: 0.152334152334 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.132678132678 0.0866891130778 153% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0589680589681 0.046263068375 127% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0786240786241 0.0685040099705 115% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12285012285 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.027027027027 0.0351676179071 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62740124488 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0515970515971 0.0309702414327 167% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0761670761671 0.0887237588012 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.02457002457 0.0209618222197 117% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.012285012285 0.0139019557991 88% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2187.0 2387.08602151 92% => OK
No of words: 382.0 408.028673835 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72513089005 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.303664921466 0.338922669872 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.238219895288 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15445026178 0.174417080927 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130890052356 0.112833075102 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62740124488 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434554973822 0.524397521467 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.3203003255 59.2087087015 77% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 25.4666666667 20.5533526081 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.8655992603 48.84282405 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.8 120.699889404 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4666666667 20.5533526081 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.06666666667 0.644075263715 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 49.2886561955 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.13559322034 1.45489161554 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326410065052 0.300154397459 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.147557587459 0.103427244359 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0784276966234 0.0752933317313 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.613333357865 0.497263757937 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.201226948406 0.151897553556 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147370504353 0.114077575197 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543312493236 0.0781384742642 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.286683991364 0.336927656856 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.054250659405 0.067059652881 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215530102012 0.210909579961 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418724802605 0.0618886996521 68% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
one of the most fun and beneficial thing
one of the most fun and beneficial things
This may eager them to learn a new specific language
Definitions of 'eager'
(of a person) wanting to do or have something very much.
the man was eager to please
synonyms: anxious, impatient, longing, yearning, wishing, hoping, hopeful, on the edge of one's sea
If someone looking for immigration,
If someone is looking for immigration,
Sentence: In addition, Travelling to a different country is more challenging which is a good think to develop our personalities.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to good and think
No. of Words: 381 while No. of Different Words: 167 //Better to put one more reason
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 381 350
No. of Characters: 1762 1500
No. of Different Words: 167 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.418 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.625 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.561 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 115 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 88 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 57 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.4 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.43 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.733 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.385 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.576 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.205 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5