From Ancient days to present days, victory is only accomplish if you have dared to attempt risk in your life. Also, in studying the biography and auto-biography of numerous successful people in present day refer their success as a result of continuous hard-work and taking risk. As far as i m concerned, heterodox bid and headstrong belief in taking risk define success in successful people's life as they love taking risk for lesson, recreational purpose and social evolution.
First of all, people who strive on trifle things brings the same result and people who aims risk might cause harm and failure but eventually ensue success. Successful people learns from their mistake. Moreover, they also get courage and pride in seeking adventure in life. Every successful people have a sad story lags behind him as he experiment his life with risk. He might get fail but he learns lesson which will always stay in his mind as a tempting clock not to repeat the same mistake again. For example, I had taken a risk in endeavoring a new project which was not consider by professor as topic, as a result it was not accepted by my teacher but he applaud me in front of all student in attempting such a new research in class. In trying risk might not spark a good result but will adds a path for further success in life.
Secondly, Prosperous people love recreational activities. People has interest in taking fun and excitement while trialing risk and adventure. For example, doing different things is also fun and exciting as no body knows whats the consequences it bring. We can learn variety of different things and experience precious moment which will of course lack in daily routine schedule.
Finally, successful people as by trying risk helps to activate social evolution. If they had not effort of taking risk than there might not have developed technologies in world. For example, Brother Wright's attempt to fly on sky by taking a risk of their own life for the first time which adds reward to the evolutionary change in world. If they had not taken risk than there might not have originated the planes and aircraft. Thus, taking risk is a manifestation of success.
In conclusion, Successful people were never got victory if they had not think beyond one's mind which is venturing risk in life. Hence, taking risk in life is very useful as it helps people for gaining life-long lesson, fun and social evolution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'experiments'.
... have a sad story lags behind him as he experiment his life with risk. He might get fail b...
Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
...endeavoring a new project which was not consider by professor as topic, as a result it w...
Line 3, column 660, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'applauds'.
...t was not accepted by my teacher but he applaud me in front of all student in attemptin...
Line 3, column 714, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'new research'.
Suggestion: new research
...front of all student in attempting such a new research in class. In trying risk might not spar...
Line 3, column 793, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'add'
... might not spark a good result but will adds a path for further success in life. ...
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: ANY_BODY
Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
...rent things is also fun and exciting as no body knows whats the consequences it bring. ...
Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
... also fun and exciting as no body knows whats the consequences it bring. We can learn...
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: IT_VBZ
Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
...no body knows whats the consequences it bring. We can learn variety of different thin...
Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...isk helps to activate social evolution. If they had not effort of taking risk than...
Line 9, column 73, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'thought'.
... were never got victory if they had not think beyond ones mind which is venturing ris...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, of course, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84337349398 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59061808759 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496385542169 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7095806063 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7142857143 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7619047619 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222565003214 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077175190983 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384580850125 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13393792161 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218883024386 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.