TPO-21 Agree or disagree essay
Without a shallow of the doubt, education play vital role in our life. some people assert that for success in a future job the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in the school. According to my own experience and actual observation about life have led me to be disagree with this topic. I delve into many reason to substantiate my point.
The first and possibly the paramount consequential reason in this, nowadays education paly vital role in our life because technology development open the new windows in our life and if we want adopt with this development we must have a lot of information in different field. we must have enough education and study hard to gain this information that can help to new system of works. The work systems change over time with the technology change and a good relate with people can’t help we to adopt with this advanced technology.
Another point that springing to mind is that, we have variety job in over society and each of them separately requires a specialty and just have good relate with people can’t help our success. if we have just good relate with people but don’t do our job carefully and exactly it can’t let me to be success in the job. For example, someone who repair factories machines, don’t relate with the people he just related with some physical machines that just need to have some information about it that he can repair it.
To sum it all up, by taking all the details in the consideration, all the people must have good education to be successful in the career than have good conversation because just the good behavior don’t satisfied peoples. I hope that, all the people can be successful in their career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
... education play vital role in our life. some people assert that for success in a fut...
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Line 1, column 335, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
... disagree with this topic. I delve into many reason to substantiate my point. The first ...
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Suggestion: We
... lot of information in different field. we must have enough education and study ha...
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Suggestion: If
...ith people can't help our success. if we have just good relate with people bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78405315615 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63587713252 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478405315615 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.6776553444 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00843943465017 0.236089414692 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00504682168493 0.076458572812 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0167384139127 0.0737576698707 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00807549948247 0.150856017488 5% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139871754001 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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