Essay topics: TPO-42 - Integrated Writing Task
line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif;">In the set of materials, the reading passage talks about glass that is favorable material for buildings and birds collision with this glass and listening passage talks about the same issue and provides some reasons to retort reading passages ideas.
The reading passage provides some solution to prevent the collision the building's glass with birds. first, one way is replaced the clear glass with one -way glass is transparent is only one direction. the building can see out but birds and others cannot see in. the second solution is paint colorful line or other design on glass than cause the bird can identify glass and don’t go through it. the third, make an artificial magnetic field to guide birds away from buildings. all the birds have natural magnetic ability that cause to building can controlled the birds direction.
g the listening passage professor think the reading passage solution can’t be useful because of some reasons. first, one_ way glass can reflect like mirror and this can cause birds see the sky on it and go through glass, therefore the first approach of the reading passage is proved unconvincing. second, with paint the glass with colorful line may be birds confused and see the line like hole and go through glass, so the writer’s second idea rebutted. The last, birds use their natural magnetic ability for long distance but they don’t use it for short distance like go from one side of the city to other side, thus retorted the last argument in the reading passage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...llision the buildings glass with birds. first, one way is replaced the clear glass wi...
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...eld to guide birds away from buildings. all the birds have natural magnetic ability...
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...reading passage is proved unconvincing. second, with paint the glass with colorful lin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, third, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 22.412803532 40% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 261.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14942528736 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69299331116 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505747126437 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 419.366225166 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.1537380009 49.2860985944 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.181818182 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06452816374 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.503762797599 0.272083759551 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.233212649296 0.0996497079465 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866716807321 0.0662205650399 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.368948905789 0.162205337803 227% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.197412664408 0.0443174109184 445% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.3589403974 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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