TPO 21 q2
For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.
A large number of students work hard in the universities worldwide with wishes and plans in their mind for the future. Nowadays it is commonly accepted that having a good educational background help the people in their future jobs to be successful, contrary to this belief there are still those who argue that the social skills are essential than any other factor in order to find suitable job. However, I am inclined to believe that studying hard in the school gives a person unique options which make him perfect for the future job.
The first aspect to point out is that working hard on the books make people knowledgeable. Companies always try to find some persons who have a strong background in the grads and educational achievements. They required some person who can do everything they want, so people with deep and vast knowledge and information are the best choice to be employed. Companies only think about their commercial benefits and the employers should provide them which cannot be achieved without knowledge.
Another significant point which should be taken in to consideration is that studying hard effect positively on the personal characteristics of people. The persons who can bear the harsh period of exams in the universities and can get the best results should be hard worked, skillful and smart. These condition give people the characteristic to work hard in any other situation and manage the problem to get the best results, so they can be the best in the job environment as they were in the universities. Furthermore, the companies know this fact that the stupid people are good for nothing and smart ones can adapt with any situation, so with higher university’s scores people will cooperate with better companies.
Finally yet importantly, with studying hard the people can continue their education toward masters or doctorate level which provide worthwhile job opportunities in the future. It is obvious in all companies that the people with higher level of education get the higher management positions. Therefore, they can compete easily with the others and get promotion in their jobs faster.
On the basis of the points which are mentioned above, I am convinced that a good performance in the schools lead to more satisfaction and accomplishment in the future job and it should be noted as the main key to be successful by teenagers. Knowledge, positive characteristics and higher level of education are the main reason which can be resulted from studying hard.
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having a good educational background help the people
having a good educational background helps the people
working hard on the books make people knowledgeable
working hard on the books makes people knowledgeable
studying hard effect positively
studying hard affect positively
These condition give people
These condition gives people
toward masters or doctorate level which provide
toward masters or doctorate level which provides
a good performance in the schools lead to more satisfaction
a good performance in the schools leads to more satisfaction
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
Need to talk about why 'the ability to relate well to people' is less important.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 413 350
No. of Characters: 2053 1500
No. of Different Words: 202 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.508 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.971 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.769 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 146 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 55 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.812 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.462 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.359 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.597 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.111 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
what do you mean by talking about why 'the ability to relate well to people' is less important? how can I mention some reasons for this without supporting the second option" studying hard"?
could you give an example that the response disagrees with the idea of question?
You don't just talk about the advantages of 'study hard' since the topic is 'A is more important than B'. So you need to compare and contract in your reasons both A and B. You don't just support one side.
for example, in your reason 1: working hard on the books makes people knowledgeable. Need to compare: if a person has only the ability to relate well to people, but couldn't handle over a duty in a company, the company is not going to hire this person.
Good! many thanks. I do not attend in the type of question, if it asked that "study hard in the most important factor for being success in the job" my response would be more appropriate!
How much is this issue affect my score? for example my score with above-suggested topic?
I would be grateful if you provide me a material about the type of question and a small explanation in way to response.
If the topic is: 'study hard is the most important factor for being success in the job', Your essays will get higher marks. but you still need to remove grammar errors.
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