TPO 26Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.Use specific reasons and examples to suppo

The career is an important part of our life. It is vital to say there will be more chance to get success if the people would start their career in the field of their interest. Some argue that it will be easier for children to follow their parents and make a career in the same field. While others hold the different idea that children do have the freedom to choose their education and as well as a career. From my perspective, the latter view carries more weight. I take the position on account for the following reasons.
Primarily, selecting a job is really a tough task for the children when they start their initial job. There is a chance that their ideas and thinking may differ from what their parents think and believe. It is true that parents have limited source to provide their child because of the job market has been changed a lot compared to past days. On the other hand, today, children have become more knowledgeable with the help of technology. As soon as, they graduated from the university, they might have gotten a lot of experience through the career fairs and the job campaigns arranged by the university. This would help the students to get more exposure to the different jobs and requirements for those. Thus, it does not make sense if parents force their children to choose the same career as they have done in their life.
Secondly, one cannot deny the fact that some parents might be having a different mindset in a matter of job perspective. In the past, parents neither had much job options nor access for an education because of poor financial condition. As a reason, lots of people were forced to accept the minimal wedge job such as working in a factory or working as a farmer. On the contrary, youngsters from today's generation, are ambitious. They may not accept to work as their parents worked earlier. There are many parents who do not want their child to follow their low demanding career path. In this regard, it is merely to say, it is not good for children to choose a similar career to their parents.
Admittedly, there are some advantages to having the same career as the parents have. This way, children will get a piece of valuable information for the career from their parents as parents have gone through the same situation earlier in their life. My own brother is a compelling example of this. My brother has joined my father's business who has a jewelry shop for the last thirty years. This way, my brother did not need to project a new business. Additionally, he saved unnecessary effort which he may need to attempt if he has chosen the different career. Thus, my father's efforts to make him stable in the same business is an example of an advantage of following is the same career as parents do have.
All in all, from all given aforementioned reasons, I strongly believe that children should follow the career in that there are good at, and they have enthusiasm towards. This is because parents may have a different thought process from their child. People should follow their career depend on their ability and their interest to work with a specific field.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, such as, as well as, it is true, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2563.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 551.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65154264973 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84493438435 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43981848777 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439201451906 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 785.7 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9123707353 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4333333333 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3666666667 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338246512351 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100198082156 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663377536352 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218844405165 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870373239457 0.0645574589148 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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