TPO 27- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans

There is no doubt that, in today's sophisticated world, a job can affect many aspects of the human lifestyle. Every individual carries his own requirement when the person goes for the job interview. Some argue that people should never leave the opportunity if they get a secured job. While others have the opposite idea that job satisfaction is merely important than considering job security. From my perspective, the former view carries more weight. I take the position on account for the following reasons.

Primarily, the time and the opportunity will never wait for anyone and it is very important that people value those factors in their life. In a search for acquiring a suitable job, they may lose a good job opportunity in life. There may be a negative outcome to wait for a suitable time to get the perfect job. My own friend is a compelling example of this. My friend, Ravi is a virtual artist and he applied in numerous companies as soon as he was graduated from the university. He rejected so many offers from the reputed companies and did not accept any of the job offers because of his higher expectations. Now, he has been trying for the last two years and did not find the job which would match his high requirements. The offer, he has declined earlier was the best offer he received in his entire life, and he might be regretting his luck that he refused to part of that company. Thus, opportunity knocks only once, and you take the opportunity.

Furthermore, in today's higher competitions in the job market, it would be difficult to get a secure job. People are facing huge competitions among co-workers. It is not easy to maintain a single position at the same company for a long time. Additionally, the companies do not think twice before they fire their employees. My own example is a compelling example of this. I got the offer to work in a government hospital as a dentist as soon as I graduated as a dentist. I took that job even though I was looking for working in a private hospital. Today, I feel really satisfied because I have one of the most secured jobs among all my friends, and they are facing trouble in getting a job because of the saturated job market.

Moreover, people would have a stable life if they have a secured job. There are other factors which are important for an individual's life. To elaborate on this, people would have family responsibilities when they grow older. In such a situation, it would be hard for them in order to survive economically if a person loses a job. On the contrary, the secured job will never emerge in such a harsh situation. Therefore, it is necessary to take the decision wisely in life which may also affect the people living with us.

All in all, from all the aforementioned reasons, I strongly believe that people should always accept the job opportunity though it may not suitable for them at that time. This is because it is difficult to find a decent job and because people may not recognize the opportunity at that time and may feel guilty later in life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... opportunity if they get a secured job. While others have the opposite idea that job ...
Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ther factors which are important for an individuals life. To elaborate on this, people woul...

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, while, i feel, no doubt, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2509.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 540.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6462962963 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71828828877 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459259259259 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 817.2 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1583603396 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.935483871 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4193548387 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64516129032 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343577447446 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096526890638 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681376710457 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20644616751 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572322430005 0.0645574589148 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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