Life is not only about earning money or doing something that you are not interested, but it is all about happiness and satisfaction. In my opinion, doing a job for satisfaction is more important than doing a job that gives you more security. This is because if you are satisfied with the job you are doing, then it gives you more happiness and can get good success.
To begin with, doing a job that gives you more fulfillment is important because you can be happy and can enjoy the work. For instance, my sister is doing a job in a software company because she is getting more salary in that job, but she basically likes to be a painter. Therefore, she was unable to concentrate on that job and facing many problems like irritation, angry and disturbance. As a result, there is no joy or enjoyment in her life even though she is getting a high salary.
Secondly, job contentment leads a person to be in a higher position and be able to solve any difficult problems. For instance, when I was studying engineering at JNTU university in India, I got a project to do on computers in my final year. Initially, I am very much fascinated to do a project in the electronics. But because of my friend force, I took the project in computers. As a result, I was unable to solve the programming and fail that project. That is why, I think to be in greater positions or to achieve success, gratification is necessary.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that satisfaction with the job you are doing is more essential than a secure job because it gives you more pleasure and joy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 285.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53684210526 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83285477464 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491228070175 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0597411635 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.3571428571 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266334865003 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964333429919 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089362041748 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190612297173 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700416968272 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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