TPO-41 - Integrated Writing Task Burning coal in power plants produces a waste product called coal ash, a material that contains small amounts of potentially harmful chemicals Environmentalists in the United States are concerned about the damage such harm

The reading and the lecture are both the coal ash which contains harmful chemicals. The article of the reading states that the power company representatives argue that new regulations are unnecessary, and provides three reasons for support. However, the lecturer refutes by saying that the government should take some new regulations to protect the environment and refutes each of the author's points.

First, the article claims that the regulations are already existed and provided an example of the linear. This special material is used by every company, which prevents leaking coal ash to the soil, ponds and, landfills. However, the professor refutes this point by saying that using linear is not sufficient because it was used only to the old ponds. But there is no safety to new ponds where people are using this ponds to drink water. Hence, there is a need to protect the environment.

Second, the article posits that recycling the coal ash into other products like concrete and bricks might be discouraged if the new rules were implemented because consumers may be very concerned to buy these products. On the other hand, the lecturer refutes this point by saying that people will be adopted to buy these products and he provided the mercury as an example.

Third, the article conveys that new regulations will increase the cost for the power companies. Nevertheless, the lecturer says that even if the cost was increased the results are well worth. This is because the customers should pay only one percent more than their actual electricity bill. Hence, it is not a big deal for customers for cleaning and protecting the environment.

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Average: 8 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, third, well, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 30.3222958057 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 272.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07352941176 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60638688516 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533088235294 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2758267943 49.2860985944 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5714285714 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06452816374 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385986145829 0.272083759551 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122391537749 0.0996497079465 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889390594861 0.0662205650399 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224342430391 0.162205337803 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474206528079 0.0443174109184 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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