Each of us has our own ideas about the issue of having a job. Some people believe that finding a job is not easy. Therefore, if they have an opportunity to get a secure a job, should will take it immediately. Some people would wait until they can find a job, which is more suitable for them. In my opinion, I agree that having an appropriate job with me is better than having any other jobs. Therefore, I will try to find until I can get a job that I am interested in it. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, having a suitable job will bring us good mood. In other word, we will be happy to perform our job if we love our job. We all acknowledge that we are living in a complex time. In this period people do not easy to have a good job, because the rate of human population is greater than ever before. In the following reason, the competition among people to have an occupation also increases more tremendously. Understanding this phenomenon, if people have a chance to have a secure job, they tend to take it right away. However, this also contains some problems due to the fact that sometimes people apply for jobs, which they are not interested in it. Meanwhile, people have to spend most their time in their workplaces. They have to handle many perplex duties. Therefore, if they do not like their job, they can be easy to get stress from their jobs. Thus, it will cause a serious problem to their health. My friend is a compelling example of this case. He graduated with a biology master's degree. However, after graduation He applied for a job in three companies. He got a job as a clerk in a financial company. Even though he got a pretty high salary by doing this job, he did not like it and he often feels unhappy.
Secondly, we can be easier to improve our ability to be professional one in our job if we have potential with this job. We all know that we have to face various situations in our job. If we have a job that we are keen on and it satisfies us, we can use our knowledge and energy to improve our capacities as best as possible. As a result, we can be an eminent in our jobs and of course it will help us to be promoted to higher position.
In conclusion, people have their own ideas about how to choose a job. In my view, for two reasons, which I have just mentioned above, I would like to wait until I can find a suitable job rather than taking right away a job that I am not keen on it.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, i feel, in conclusion, of course, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 83.0 43.0788530466 193% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19957983193 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43909915376 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436974789916 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7982337624 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.9310344828 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4137931034 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44827586207 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356458022489 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109546897908 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073211620981 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249721907055 0.150856017488 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713741615323 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 11.7677419355 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 10.9000537634 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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