tpo 28 writing
In the past, most off the parents did not know that what is their kids field or major and this matter is not too important to them. I am totally agree with this situation that there is more involvement between parents and children' s education.
In my opinion first reason might be reduced the amount of children per parents. Nowadays it does matter how many kids you have because of some issues like economic situation is different with past, kids does not consider as workers. this reasons lead to fewer children and with fewer children importance of each raised up, so, parents would take more care about their children not only in educational fields, but another fields also.
another important things that impress the amount of educational' s involvement is parent' s information. In the past parents did not know about education or any major of study, however, today parents become more informational about the knowledge and encourage their kids to improve themselves by educational progress because now they are know how does human increase ability by its knowledge so, they involved in their children's studies, moreover, children' s futures.
another reason that riced in my mind is that past parents do not have enough time or if they had it they did not have access to their kid' study. there were no internet and follow of this there were no online information about their kids, however, today parents can easily access to students information about grades, teachers, courses, and whatever exist in educational system.
For wrapping up this condition is so helpful for the students to progress themselves by their parent' involvement and have to appreciate this situation that parents did not have when they were a kid.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...not too important to them. I am totally agree with this situation that there is more ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...een parents and children s education. In my opinion first reason might be redu...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ast, kids does not consider as workers. this reasons lead to fewer children and with...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... educational fields, but another fields also. another important things that i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onal fields, but another fields also. another important things that impress th...
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Suggestion: Another
...fields, but another fields also. another important things that impress the amoun...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...ucational progress because now they are know how does human increase ability by its ...
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Suggestion:
...tudies, moreover, children s futures. another reason that riced in my mind is ...
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Suggestion: Another
...s, moreover, children s futures. another reason that riced in my mind is that pa...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...did not have access to their kid study. there were no internet and follow of this the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...whatever exist in educational system. For wrapping up this condition is so hel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 289.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99653979239 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54945222756 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515570934256 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.2859502082 48.9658058833 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.4 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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