I disagree with the statement. I believe that having a five- day job with shorter hours would be more enjoyable based on three reasons. First of all, having a three-day job with long hours can be very stressful for employees. Also, workers become fatigue very quickly. Besides, it might be very costly for the company.
Working in three days a week for long hours is very stressful. It has been proved that when people work for long hours, it is possible for them to make a lot of mistake because of their stress. In my opinion, when someone works for long hours, he has a lot of stress about his works and since he wants to do them perfectly, he sometimes make a mistake. Thus, working in five days for shorter hours would be more enjoyable.
In addition, workers become tired quickly. I believe that when someone works for long hours, he will be tired very quickly. For example, my father worked in a bank. he had to got up early in the morning and worked until mid night. When he came home, he was very fatigue and went to bed without eating dinner.
Furthermore, working until mid night can be very costly for a company. All sections of the company must be opened and the company have to provide more foods and facilities for its employees in order to encourage them to work for long hours. Hence, if workers work in five days a week for shorter hours, it will be more enjoyable for the company too.
In conclusion, in my opinion working in three days a week for long hours won't be very enjoyable for employees, because it makes them to feel more pressure and stress in the workplace. Secondly, it is possible that workers get tired very quickly. Moreover, working for long hours can have additional costs for companies and it is not enjoyable for them. Hence, I think that working in five days a week for shorter hours would be more enjoyable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun mistake seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of mistakes'.
Suggestion: a lot of mistakes
... hours, it is possible for them to make a lot of mistake because of their stress. In my opinion,...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 337, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...ants to do them perfectly, he sometimes make a mistake. Thus, working in five days f...
^^^^
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...or example, my father worked in a bank. he had to got up early in the morning and ...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'first', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'first of all', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.188328912467 0.229887763892 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.161803713528 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0901856763926 0.0866891130778 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.079575596817 0.046263068375 172% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0769230769231 0.0685040099705 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.148541114058 0.118717715034 125% => OK
Participles: 0.0424403183024 0.0351676179071 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.33246574918 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0212201591512 0.0309702414327 69% => OK
Particles: 0.0026525198939 0.00188951952338 140% => OK
Determiners: 0.0503978779841 0.0887237588012 57% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.026525198939 0.0209618222197 127% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0106100795756 0.0139019557991 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1848.0 2387.08602151 77% => OK
No of words: 336.0 408.028673835 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.86048508987 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.285714285714 0.338922669872 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.217261904762 0.251872472559 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.122023809524 0.174417080927 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0744047619048 0.112833075102 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33246574918 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.419642857143 0.524397521467 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.8101338627 59.2087087015 71% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5533526081 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2197039469 48.84282405 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 120.699889404 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.5533526081 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.809523809524 0.644075263715 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 37.7261904762 45.7405998639 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.19166666667 1.45489161554 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336355314763 0.300154397459 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.150734012803 0.103427244359 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108127099969 0.0752933317313 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.51482973043 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158811365287 0.151897553556 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134831438248 0.114077575197 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914817069316 0.0781384742642 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.335670818136 0.336927656856 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.109000142537 0.067059652881 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229686109884 0.210909579961 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774268236409 0.0618886996521 125% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8870967742 42% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.86379928315 336% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 10.0 2.4623655914 406% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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