TPO-31- Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the pastUse specific reasons and examples to

In last century the world is getting changed in a fast pace. People need to adapt to the hight rate of world change in all aspects of their lives. Certainly, this rate has infulenced the satistfaction dgeree of the all human being. Personally, I believe that nowadays people feel less satisfied comparing the former centuries who had more fate and happiness in their lives. I would support my own specific reasons in following paragraphs.
To begin with, fast pace of world changing demands past pace of life. This means that people need to live and work in fast pace to be able to survive in a situation in which you experience the high growth of the population which demands more resources, especially in big cities where the population is exploding. Although some people would hold the idea that fast change of the world has brought better healthcare or provided safe and nutritous food for people, however, personally I strongly believe that last centuries people are experienceing too much stress and feeling exhausted. They need to stay at traffic congestion for long hours or wait at the elevator or work hard at the office and even take home the tasks.
Furthermore, one of the most rapid changes of the world is climate changing issue which caused too many extreme weather situations. People living in most part of this planet such as Africa and middle east are suffering from drought, water shortage, floods and foor insecurity. Additionally, other people who are still living in a better situation such as Western Europe are worried about their future, too. Also, by following media they concern about the situation of others who are struggling in the bad situation. Therefore, I beleive that either people in developed or developing countries are suffering from too much stress which this rapid changes has brought them.
To conclude, weather people need to live and work with higher pace or fast climate change affects their life, people are too much distressful comparing past. That is why we should to think about some solutions and policies to relieve people worldwide.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99140401146 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55745065529 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538681948424 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5730174973 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.875 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230717985271 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078024411455 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498434934344 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150315890339 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390826277103 0.0645574589148 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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