TPO 44 - Integrated Writing Task

According to the reading passage, there are three possible reasons to show that the discovered coin is not genuine historical evidence from the people who came from Europe termly Norse. While, the lecturer states that it is not convincing at all and most of the researchers strongly believe that the coin belongs to Norse, subsequently, it is a reasonable historic evidence. Then she provides that there exist three reasons representing that it is not fake.
First, the author claims that the coin has found in the state of Maine in United States where is too far from the first settlement of Norse. On contrary, the professor repudiates it by illustrating that Norse people traveled long distance along the North America and they could have reached far-fetched places and many of other objects have found belonging to Norse as the coin.
Second, the text posits that any other coin has not been found in the region. The lecturer, however, opposes it by saying that Norse brought silver coins with themselves to North America and took them back again to Europe. Accordingly, she adds that Norse were not necessarily permanent inhabitants in North America and after they voyage they packed their coins to ship to Europe again.
Third, although the writer claims that Norse understood that silver coins were not valued among Americans, however, the speaker disapproves this by demonstrating that native Americans valued the coins. To put her idea forward, she explains that the silver coins were appealing for the native Americans for their beauty. Consequently, the people liked them for their jewelries like necklaces. Therefore, the European started to trade with them by coins. It shows that the coins were available in North America, too.

Votes
Average: 8 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, first, however, second, so, then, therefore, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 22.412803532 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 285.0 270.72406181 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1298245614 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54230805676 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554385964912 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2365588469 49.2860985944 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.461538462 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.538478941021 0.272083759551 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171709739558 0.0996497079465 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770490028848 0.0662205650399 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302498311773 0.162205337803 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447780925316 0.0443174109184 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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