Education is important part of our live. It defines our success in future, that’s why it is so important to learn more effectively during school or univercity. Some people think that learning is more effective when you do your work alone rather than do your work in team; others disagree. Even though when you do you project alone you became more independed, In my view, work in team is better for two important reasons.
The main reason is that during assignment you will not only make your project but also you will improve your communication skill. This skill will help you in the future to solve a problem in community. For example, last month my classmate I had to do chemistry lab about reaction of acids with different components. During this experiment we had to talk, after all we need to cooperate and solve problems to get good mark. On the other hand, if I did experiments alone, I wouldn’t get such helpful experince. This skill helps me to solve a many different conflict situation. As you can see, work in team provides not only knowledge of topic but also improves your communication with other people.
Another imprtant reason is that your partner might help to understand the material better. When you do an assignment with another person you can obtain some extra information about uour topic. For instance, iin my school I had to make a presetation about artificial inteligence with my friend. If I were alone, I wouldn’t be able to create good presentation because I was not familiar with this topic and had a very basicexperience of doing presentation. But my friend was interested in that topic and he had a quite good skills making and presenting presentations. Without him I would be able to do it. He not only helped me to get a good grade also he explained to me many different things in that field. As a result, I got a important information. This experience taught me that work in team is bette because you can et help or you can give help to somebody.
In the sum, work in team provides more efficient learning of the material. Not only because you develop and improve your communication skills but also because you can get help from your partner.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...art of our live. It defines our success in future, that's why it is so important to ...
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... good mark. On the other hand, if I did experiments alone, I wouldn't get such helpful...
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...perince. This skill helps me to solve a many different conflict situation. As you can see, wor...
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... situation. As you can see, work in team provides not only knowledge of topic but...
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...s your communication with other people. Another imprtant reason is that your par...
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...help to understand the material better. When you do an assignment with another perso...
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...hings in that field. As a result, I got a important information. This experience ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, after all, for example, for instance, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73958333333 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81095154133 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486979166667 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.941061425 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7272727273 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181962840894 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575435579498 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742314789783 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13381070261 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822825823695 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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