The event around the world is a very important part of our lives. We live in society and a a resultit is a very important to understand a different situations that are close to us. Some people think that is important to know about events happening around the world, even thought they are unlikely to affact ours daily lives; others disagree. In my view, it is important ot know what events are going around the world for two important reasons.
The main reason is that you will be able to seize more opportunities and improve your life. We live in the world which changes very fast. This changes could provide some benefits to people who can get them and use. For example, two years ago my friend Dmitro found oud about science conference in Barselona. The topic of this conference was about artificial inteligence. He understood that even was his opportunity to present his own ideas in that field. He had bought a ticket and flew to Barselona. He presented his project and some company took his phone and contacts. After a few week he got an invitaion to work in a very propgresive company. As you can see, my friend improved his life by just knowing about one event
Another important reason is that you will have topic to duiscuss with your friends or family members. We have a lot of different intresting things in our world such as improving of artificial inteligence, which could lead to improvement of our life by automisation of many proceses. For instance, last week my friend Roman and I discussed different cosequences of developing arificial inteligence. we focus our discussion first on positive impact of AI (Artificial Inteligence) such as better products and lower prices and bad consequenses such as high unempoyment rate. As you can see different events in our world could provide good topics for discussion.
In sum, knowing about a different events in our world that even don't influence on our life could be important. This event could be not olny used for a discussion, but also they can give you some benefits. That's why you should know about different things in the world/
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, for instance, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78021978022 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67813042298 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521978021978 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6517202376 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8571428571 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256541874518 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805598784834 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863465249697 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174497806321 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784204991895 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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