The majority of people who are in their early to mid-twenties think that in today’s world, teachers are likely to be more appreciated and valued by society. They support that they are capable to teach their students more effectively than in the past. However, the notion does not reflect the stance that I hold and should be thought about in a different light. I believe that teachers are likely to be more appreciated and valued by society in the past. This is because students are able to learn a lot of things from the Internet and students’ mind is becoming selfish than in the past.
First of all, as the Internet appeared, students are able to learn a lot of things by themselves. To be specific, students’ respect toward teacher has been decreasing due to the Internet appearance, which as a result allows students to learn a lot of subjects in their school as well as extracurricular subjects. As modern society is becoming increasingly, today’s fast-paced world requires people to have a lot of knowledge beyond from the school. Thus, students are no longer dependent on their teachers and find their ways to learn required matters from the Internet. For example, when I was in elementary school, I could find information from the Internet without the help from teachers. From that time, I started to not ask my teachers any questions what I did not know because the Internet is easy tool to find information and has enormous database from the world. Throughout this experience, today’s teacher were not appreciated and valued by society than in the past. This proves that today’s teachers are likely to not be appreciated and valued by society because of the Internet.
Moreover, in today’s world, many students would not respect their teachers due to declining birth rate in the world. In addition, their parents are likely to care their children severely which allows their children be selfish. Today’s children are allowed to do anything even it is wrong in their parents’ wings which occur severe societal phenomenon. For instance, a study done by the New York Times, it revealed that today’s children are more likely to be selfish than in the past. It was indicated that 62 percent of 200 Korean teachers responded their cruel events from their parents’ overprotection. As a result, today’s teacher could not be appreciated and valued by society because of selfish children under their parents’ protection.
To sum up, I believe that teacher could not be appreciate and valued by society because students are able to learn a lot of things from the internet and their mind is becoming selfish than in the past. All things I have mentioned, it is my belief that my argument regarding this topic has been effectively and precisely delivered with the reasons.
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'first of all', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24236983842 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.166965888689 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0718132854578 0.0866891130778 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0466786355476 0.046263068375 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0592459605027 0.0685040099705 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134649910233 0.118717715034 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0412926391382 0.0351676179071 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92705571782 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0359066427289 0.0309702414327 116% => OK
Particles: 0.00179533213645 0.00188951952338 95% => OK
Determiners: 0.0700179533214 0.0887237588012 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00897666068223 0.0209618222197 43% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0107719928187 0.0139019557991 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2838.0 2387.08602151 119% => OK
No of words: 469.0 408.028673835 115% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05117270789 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.373134328358 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.289978678038 0.251872472559 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.213219616205 0.174417080927 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119402985075 0.112833075102 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92705571782 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.398720682303 0.524397521467 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.1460074393 59.2087087015 75% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.3333333333 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5927248675 48.84282405 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.142857143 120.699889404 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.644075263715 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 51.3312011372 45.7405998639 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.53289473684 1.45489161554 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327907439381 0.300154397459 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.195447620131 0.103427244359 189% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.112021144716 0.0752933317313 149% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.550700991102 0.497263757937 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.095141843338 0.151897553556 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158755286592 0.114077575197 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941946960469 0.0781384742642 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.438398997517 0.336927656856 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.134933256348 0.067059652881 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261894593239 0.210909579961 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809342083115 0.0618886996521 131% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.86379928315 285% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 11.0 2.4623655914 447% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.