Appreciation and Valuation are both abstract ideas. Hence, it is not possible to physically measure them over time or we can never draw a graph of their changes. But still, some feelings can be sensed in a overall way and we can tell whether it really exists or not. Teachers are the main media of education and one of the most important contributors in the society. But I agree with the statement that their valuation and appreciation has been on the decrease in comparison with what was in practice in the past. Logical reasoning behind this agreement of idea has been discussed in this essay.
First and foremost, one important reason that can be cited is the divergence of education in recent times. Education is more widespread nowadays, thanks to electronic media and its uprising. Once upon a time, in the past societies education was not this available. Not everybody had access to education and the teachers who studied a particular subject were much respected because they were the only one who has the clear knowledge about it through years of practice and endeavor. Teachers were indeed the only medium of learning something and getting taught by. School and Institutional education were also much valued due to being the sole way of educating oneself. But in recent times, we have seen much change in this societal structure. Education has become so diverge and one can learn from almost any sources available. People are learning through YouTube, Wikipedia and other resources available online in their own accord without the need of any physical presence of teacher. Self-education has also gained much popularity in contrast with the institutional education. For example, students are using websites to prepare their assignments and self-teaching themselves for the upcoming exam. With the availability of resources online they have restrained themselves in giving importance to the teacher and their classes. That is why, In my opinion, this rise of alternative resources of education is one of the key reason, the importance of teachers are not valued in the society like it was done before.
Secondly, another reason that can be cited is the change of societal point of view in respect and appreciation. Rampant development of the society in industrial infrastructure has deviated the concept of respect and values. Nowadays, we see more respect of people are being given to the one who has more money in their hand in comparison to those who have knowledge. Teaching as a profession has fallen behind in this monetary scale of measurement and hence lost the sense of respect and importance they used to hold in the past societies. For example, long before in every kingdom, the king always had chief educator in his council, who not only maintained the education of the subjects but also handled important documents of the kingdom itself. Overtime in modern society, we do not see such trend which gives importance of teacher in the council itself. Rather politics and business has taken over this issues and their importance has risen over time.
In conclusion, it can be said that teachers must always be respected in a society as their contributions always has uplifted the nation and the human race overall. Sadly, for some mentioned reasons, these respect has been diminished in recent times. We must work together to solve these issues and bring the earlier situation back to bring more stability and development to the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... But still, some feelings can be sensed in a overall way and we can tell whether it really exist...
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Suggestion: societies'; society's
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...tance of teacher in the council itself. Rather politics and business has taken over th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 89.0 52.1666666667 171% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 8.0752688172 359% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2892.0 1977.66487455 146% => OK
No of words: 572.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05594405594 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89045207381 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75557308753 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482517482517 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 928.8 618.680645161 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.185331651 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.724137931 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.724137931 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13793103448 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138987588472 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396317413512 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037217536073 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835352866218 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309834368379 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 86.8835125448 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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