Teachers are the pillars of the future of the society as they have a significant role in preparing the next generation. To encourage the teachers to perform as their best in classrooms, they must be praised in the society as much as it is possible. Because teaching is a very tiring job and being appreciated emotionally can give this moral to the teachers to do better and better. Germane to this fact, a question that is matter of debate, a controversial one, is whether teachers are being respected like the past or not. Although it might not be accepted by all, I am personally on the belief that the teachers are not valued as they deserve as before.
One compelling reason deserving to be mentioned is that these days, unfortunately, people respect money and someone who is rich. To delineate, in the past people were more interested in moral precepts and they used to appreciate someone who has a great personality and this fact, sadly, has changed due to machine life. It is apparent that nowadays people judge each other based on their assets and properties and money. It is regrettable to declare that in my community, despite the prominent role of teachers in preparing and educating the students, they have one of the low-paid occupations. Consequently, they are not respected as before because they are not too prosperous or wealthy.
Another reason substantiating my stance which is equally important, if not more, is that the children have become so impolite and rude. To elaborate, students deride the teachers in class or even after school which is due to lack of their manners at home. These days, kids are so irresponsible and rude even with their parents, let alone teachers. A vivid example will shed more light on the issue. My father is a teacher and told me a story about how his students were respecting him and paying attention to his lecture when he had become a teacher at his early classes. Then he went to the office and he did not teach for quite a while. This fall he has returned to the school to teach before he retires next year, because he loves teaching and wanted to experience it once more. But he got so disappointed the first night he came back after school. He was so unhappy about that students tried to mock him and insult him with stupid jokes about the teachers. He told me that the students were respecting him much more in the past than these students.
To recapitulate, it is obvious that the teachers were more respected in the previous decades not only by society, but also by their own students. Although some people may not be agreed with that, I, based on my own experiences, claim that teachers must be admired more if we want a better country for the next decades.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.166982922201 0.229887763892 73% => OK
Verbs: 0.187855787476 0.158761421928 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0853889943074 0.0866891130778 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0740037950664 0.046263068375 160% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0834914611006 0.0685040099705 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115749525617 0.118717715034 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0531309297913 0.0351676179071 151% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64744895267 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0360531309298 0.0309702414327 116% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0948766603416 0.0887237588012 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.011385199241 0.0209618222197 54% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0132827324478 0.0139019557991 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2728.0 2387.08602151 114% => OK
No of words: 481.0 408.028673835 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67151767152 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.303534303534 0.338922669872 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.234927234927 0.251872472559 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162162162162 0.174417080927 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0956340956341 0.112833075102 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64744895267 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492723492723 0.524397521467 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.9187266585 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.8636363636 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0965189137 48.84282405 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 120.699889404 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8636363636 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.409090909091 0.644075263715 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 45.3563598564 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 0.972527472527 1.45489161554 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34368829984 0.300154397459 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130154722855 0.103427244359 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0840361711096 0.0752933317313 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.48555595559 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136993199732 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131128936975 0.114077575197 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539704158285 0.0781384742642 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.380211767991 0.336927656856 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0980521454277 0.067059652881 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242284358151 0.210909579961 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045657383909 0.0618886996521 74% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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