In today's societies, the question of whether doing a lot of various types of tasks instead of doing analogous tasks make workers feel more delighted has become a controversial issue among people in many circles and camps. Different people have diverse types of responses to this topic based on their social, cultural, or even familial backgrounds. However, as far as I'm concerned, I believe that employees feel happy when they do a lot of different works in their workday for some reason that I elaborate them in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the first thing comes to mind right off the bat is that people become tired when they do similar jobs in one day. In fact, people inherently like to experience diverse condition during a day. Accordingly, if workers just implement a particular type of task whole of the day, they will feel exhausted and less energetic. Therefore, they are not delighted with what they do. Let's make a brief explanation about that. For instance, I remember that when I was accepted to my first job position, I had to receive the faxes and distribute them in a company. After about 1 month, I felt that this is a monotonous job that takes me to depression. Hence, jobs must include various types of tasks to prevent from workers' dissatisfaction.
Another noteworthy aspect that should be mentioned is that variety of tasks paves the ground for workers to become more initiative. To put it another way, when someone engages in a plenty of careers during one day, his mind try to associate these things with others. So, their brain works harder than usual and it is possible that he devises a new way in those tasks. Let me shed a light on my point. Based on the research that was published in a well-known journal, Scientists recognized that the efficiency of the brain increases whenever it envolve with miscellaneous situations in short time. In addition, They found out that the brain ability ameliorates wherever it experiences more new things. Thus, various types of tasks help people to improve their mental ability and feel more delighted.
In conclusion, there are a plenty of reasons to show that involving in different kinds of jobs is more interesting than doing one job all the day. Not only it prevents the boring sense of workers but also it provides a way to become more creative. Consequently, It is essential that managers consider diverse types of careers for their employees.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
In todays societies, the question of whether doing a lot of various types of tasks i...
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Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...amilial backgrounds. However, as far as Im concerned, I believe that employees fee...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ey are not delighted with what they do. Lets make a brief explanation about that. Fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in short, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87019230769 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72844904141 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543269230769 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9269708118 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4761904762 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8095238095 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90476190476 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339275180519 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874569782129 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711121289537 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206171905536 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603398608403 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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