Nowadays the job market demands always more often multitasking people. Personally, I believe that to be able and have a job that includes different types of task to do is more satisfactory than doing the same mansion every workday. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, the job takes most of the daytime in a working life, it is very important for a worker to be satisfied and happy with what a person does during the workday. Diversify the work day doing many different things is the best way to avoid getting bored and lower the efficiency on the tasks he or her have to do at the end of a workday. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I worked for e-company, which was selling sports items on the internet, I was in charge of the photographic studio, my job required to do many different things. For example, I had to prepare all the items, organize the shooting with the models, using Photoshop to prepare the photos to publish and many other little things that made my workday runs very fast. If I had just to shoot all day, probably I would get bored very soon, like that time when I had to replace of a coworker at the expedition office, I spent the whole day packing items for delivering, It was so boring, I could not do that monotasking job for more the few days.
Secondly, have different tasks is an opportunity to learn new skills, nowadays the job market always requires multitasking people, therefore, be able to do different mansions will improve the chances to get a better or new job. For example, when I was looking for a part-time job during my university years, I got a job in a call center only because they also needed a person capable to use a different kind of software such as Photoshop, Illustrator and excel too. Fortunately, I had all of these skills and they gave the job right away and in no time, I learned other new skills, and my pay increased a lot.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that to be multitasking is a very important skill to get a good job in the modern job market. It is also very important for business people to give to their employee the possibility to diversify their workday because in this will lead them to be efficient in their daily duties and therefore it is beneficial for both workers and businesspersons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50700934579 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6759212274 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502336448598 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.984537459 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.785714286 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5714285714 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228755941841 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838483271128 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781284439726 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13977419569 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745888214818 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.47 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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