Nowadays the job market demands more often multitasking people. Personally, I believe that to be able to have a job that includes different types of tasks to do is more satisfactory than doing the same job every workday. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, a job takes up most of the daytime in a working life, so it is very important for a worker to be satisfied and happy with what a person does during the workday. Diversify the work day doing many different things is the best way to avoid getting bored and lower the efficiency of the tasks he or her has to do at the end of a workday. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I worked for an e-company, which was selling sports items on the internet, I was in charge of the photographic studio and my job required doing many different things. For example, I had to prepare all the items, organize the shooting with the models, use Photoshop to prepare the photos to publish and many other little things that made my workday run very fast. If I just had to shoot all day, probably I would have got bored very quickly. One time when I had to replace a co-worker at the packaging office, I spent the whole day packing items for delivering. It was so boring that I could not do that monotasking job for more than a few days.
Secondly, doing different tasks is an opportunity to learn new skills. Nowadays the job market always requires multitasking people; therefore, to be able to do different tasks will improve the chances to get a better or new job. For example, when I was looking for a part-time job during my university years, I got a job at a call center only because they needed a person capable to use different kinds of software such as Photoshop, Illustrator and excel. Fortunately, I had all of these skills and they gave me the job right away and in no time. I learned other new skills, and my pay increased a lot.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that to multitask is a very important skill to get a good job in the modern job market. It is also very important for business people to give to their employees the possibility to diversify their workday because in this way, it will lead them to be efficient in their daily duties and therefore it is beneficial for both workers and businesspeople.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...e workday. Diversify the work day doing many different things is the best way to avoid getting...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...asks he or her has to do at the end of a workday. My own experience is a compelli...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...raphic studio and my job required doing many different things. For example, I had to prepare a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46171693735 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65301634022 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501160092807 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8399286126 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9444444444 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243405547459 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811669065563 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703167466036 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147987069764 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767036334706 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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