These days that most of the parents go to work and usually spend less time with their children, training children become an important issue for the parents. Some parents concern about the children's schoolwork, however, others prefer to play a game and make pleasure time with their children. In my view, doing things that are related to the children's schoolwork is better than other things. I will elaborate my opinion on the following reasons.
First and foremost, the parents can attract the children to the school and teach them new things. The parents are the most impressive people in the future of their children, hence, they should lead them how to enjoy learning. For instance, they can take the children to nature and show them how birds make their nests or teach them other things practically. Therefore, spending time on the children's schoolwork is more necessary than playing games with them.
Furthermore, the children will perceive that schoolwork is extremely important for their future. When parents take time for their schoolwork, the children will realize that schoolwork is an important issue, hence they will do them seriously. Also, for being thankful for their parent's works and making them happy, the children will study hard to be a good student.
Admittedly, the children can do the games with their friend, but, they rarely can study with their friends. When the children are alone or are with their friends, they usually prefer to play a game to have a pleasant time, hence the parents do not need to be concern about the playing with the children. For instance, when I was a student in elementary school, usually play a game with my friends or classmates and I have never studied with them. Therefore, the parents should spend time on the children's schoolwork instead of playing with them.
All in all, I believe that spending the time to play with the children is not a good idea for those parents that do not have enough time. Those parents should spend time for doing interesting things that are related to the children's schoolwork because the children will attract to learning and be a successful person in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d be a successful person in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, so, therefore, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92582417582 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45354588154 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.403846153846 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8302855131 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.470588235 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332676324645 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145348198902 0.076458572812 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977630005365 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229572889958 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835814535545 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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