TPO 45
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Making decision is an important part of our life from child hood, and It is advisable to consult with an appropriate person. Some people claim that parents'role was not more noticeable as guider in the past in compare with the present time, but I do not think so. I feel this way for 3 main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, having limit knowledge among younger persons was common in the past. For example, my father grew in a town and did not access to school. As a result, it was clear that he relied on his parents experiences for choosing among complicated situations.
The second cause may referred to the development of technology these days. Having up-date sources of information make it possible for us to obtain many awareness by clicking on our computer's keyboard only in a few second. By having enough knowledge, we reach to self-confidence for selecting suitable conditions, and less dependence to our mothers and fathers.
Last, appearing various field of sciences and society' need to being professional in a certain matters bring us the opportunities for consulting with expert persons.
In all, what drives someone to think that parents have pale part in children' making decision process, may fall in to 3 main categories including low level of their knowledge, our developing world, and need to expert ones in each fields.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 148, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun awareness seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much awareness', 'a good deal of awareness'.
Suggestion: much awareness; a good deal of awareness
...ation make it possible for us to obtain many awareness by clicking on our computers keyboard o...
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Line 9, column 211, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun second seems to be countable; consider using: 'few seconds'.
Suggestion: few seconds
...ing on our computers keyboard only in a few second. By having enough knowledge, we reach t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, for example, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 231.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00432900433 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80592289199 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.524837075471 127% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8244033284 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.090909091 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161849074237 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494363865831 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337042433284 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076674348844 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386080180246 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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