Celebrities and famous people are important and impressive people in each society especially, for young people. In my view, the youth and teenagers are more impressed by famous people than elders. I will elaborate my opinion on the following reasons.
Young people and teenagers are searching for the ways of living and making their future. Hence, start to search for champions and heroes to follow their lives. Most of the youth would like to be a famous person in the future. Therefore, they study and search the famous people's manners of life and try to know more about their opinions and personal lives. For instance, my cousin when he was a teenager, would like to be a footballist, hence he always studies the lifestyle of famous footballists. Therefore, the famous people's opinions are extremely impressive on the young people.
Admittedly, youngers usually watch the football games or other games to release their energy. Young people are full of energy and want to release it in different ways. One of the healthy ways is watching games or exciting movies, by this way, youth become interested in the athletes and celebrities. Hence, their opinions and lifestyle become important for youth. On the other hand, elders prefer to have a calm lifestyle for the rest of their lives. For instance, my grandfather when he was a young man loved watching the football game, but, now he does not like it at all. Therefore, the opinions of famous people are more important for youth than elders.
Furthermore, youth are going to be attracted to famous persons. The young people love some celebrities because they are famous, rich and some of them are good looking and attractive. Hence, they would like to know more about their personal lives and opinions. For example, one of my friends loved a celebrity of our country and she extracted all the details of his personal life and believes. Hence, I think the opinions of celebrities are more impressive for young people than elders.
By the mentioned grounds, I believe that the opinions of famous people are more important for youth and teenagers than old persons. Because young people are searching for the best lifestyle, they are full of energy, love the famous people and would like to be a famous person in the future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91948051948 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54651978771 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.405194805195 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0016621647 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.347826087 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7391304348 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183278501261 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075173608765 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617143759455 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140592066453 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409264478552 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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