Yes, I think it is important to know the events happening outside, even if it will not affect our daily lives. I think this, because of two reasons. One is because the event happening, may be coming towards you. My other reason, is because that event may start riots, and even your friends and family may start getting violent in protest.
My first thought on knowing what is happening around the world is that the event may be coming to you. This means that the event, even if it is a war or disease in a foreign country, it may slowly come to your country and maybe even your state. One example is a disease. The event happening on the news may be a disease going on in another country. You may not think this, but the disease may spread to your country, and even you may get infected.There was a good example of this. Before there was MERS outbreak in middle east. Some countries avoided this by not allowing some people who were affected to travel in other countries.This was known because of the news.
Secondly, the event may start riots that get violent. I understand that many government do things that make people very angry. One example of these, is when the government makes a new law that no one likes. This may start a riot, and make citizens angry and violent. There are many examples of these that happen in the world. It is always good to know what could happen to the government.
In conclusion, I think that it is good to know what events are occuring in the outside world. The event might be coming towards you, or even the event may start causing violent protests. The outside world is something good to keep track of, so that you know when to be prepared.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, i think, in conclusion, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46278317152 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29756141377 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462783171521 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1494720923 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.95 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.45 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20648806805 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737165010607 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695348351877 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141727147143 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411820117358 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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