Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Yes, I think workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. I think this, because of two reasons. One reason, is because it is fun to do different things everyday. My other reason is, doing a different task, can help you experience other things.
My first reason why I think it is better for workers to do different tasks everyday, is because it is enjoyable to do different things everyday. I know this, because i have experienced doing a job everyday at school. It was very boring and I wanted to do something else. Something enjoyable, means you want to do it more. You can get more money out of it, and not get bored.
My Final reason why is think it is better for workers to do a different task everyday, is because it helps you experience different things. You can use this knowledge to get another job, that pays more. Having more experience, means you know more things, so you may also be getting smarter from the job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...rkers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday...
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Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ecause it is fun to do different things everyday. My other reason is, doing a different ...
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Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...etter for workers to do different tasks everyday, is because it is enjoyable to do diffe...
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Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... it is enjoyable to do different things everyday. I know this, because i have experience...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... because i have experienced doing a job everyday at school. It was very boring and I wan...
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Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
...ot get bored. My Final reason why is think it is better for workers to do a differ...
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Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...tter for workers to do a different task everyday, is because it helps you experience dif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 52.1666666667 27% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 1977.66487455 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 407.700716846 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49468085106 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43435196479 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 212.727598566 46% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521276595745 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 618.680645161 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0458242183 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4166666667 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439293069299 0.236089414692 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165158581176 0.076458572812 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.240731603705 0.0737576698707 326% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.334658551776 0.150856017488 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.220446495457 0.0645574589148 341% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.23 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 86.8835125448 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.