Since the past time, many countries do trade everyday. Hence, most supermarkets should sell food produce from within their country and oversea. Some people think we have to sell our country’s products in our country and not to buy from other country. I strongly disagree about supermarkets should only sell food produce from within their country rather than from oversea. I have two reasons which I explore in my essay.
To begin with, imports are cheaper than our country’s product. My country's territory is so small so we cannot produce more than other country like China. Therefore, imports are cheaper. One good example of this is in my country, where meat is very expensive; most people can’t eat meat. However, if they import from other country, they can eat more and cheaper.
Secondly, if we import with other countries, we can eat many food like their own specialty. In my country, we also have specialty separate areas. Thus, other country have specialties too. For instance, tropical fruits are the most popular example. Tropical fruits can grow only in a few countries. For that reason, in the past, when we did not know fruits that we did not import.
In conclusion, I believe we have to export and import many products. And we need various imports. First, my country’s products are so expensive but if we import some food, we can buy more cheaply. Second, we can eat various food from other countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...at various food from other countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 242.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94628099174 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47719259722 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 212.727598566 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520661157025 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7497087362 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.85 100.406767564 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1 20.6045352989 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.95 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297973988746 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105065557656 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18311501196 0.0737576698707 248% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201805978247 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.20548714221 0.0645574589148 318% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.54 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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