With the ever-increasing era of technology, surfing of information has become easier fetched than past decades. It has become absolutely paramount that people are abreast with the current trends happening around the world. Although, some group of people may hold views that trivial information which has no crucial importance to them should be neglected, I, definitely subscribe that information should be absorbed even if it is not directly beneficial to you and it is indispensable to live in this present era disregarding the essence of information.
To begin with, information aids social communication. Acquiring information can be never be over emphasized as it avails one the opportunity to be abreast with one’s immediate environment as the world as a whole. This enables one to conversant and promote one's ability to communicate with people freely without feeling intimidated or secluded. For instance, last week, Fox news channel publicized the nutritional defects of Complan milk in infants. Having heard this vital information despite not having children, I took a mental note. Later on, an argument was raised among my colleagues on the effectiveness of this product, I expounded on this issue and they were amazed on my immense knowledge about the product even though I had no child. Therefore, I was able to associate and communicate freely as I had a great idea to share.
In addition, its incontrovertible to dismiss its contribution to personal development. With the myriad of sources used to surf information such the two prime sources mainly internet and social media. It has become very easy to harness information very effectively and efficiently. This broadens our Knowledge and makes use see various perspectives of life.
what's more, as the saying goes, knowledge is power.
Furthermore, a noteworthy recent research conducted by mass communication researchers proves that people are enlightened about the current events in the world as it is helpful either to the hearers or non-hearers. It keeps people comfortable and vigilant in various situations.
To wrap up, It will be cowardly to disregard events or information happening around world as it depicts lack of knowledge, leads to timidity and low self esteem. To make a long story short, people should gain the slightest piece of information as quickly as possible without weighing its benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32010582011 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14084453579 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589947089947 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5934870748 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.842105263 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8947368421 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114053996377 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313655664037 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387937444508 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518111534362 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339141096971 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.