TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

There is no gainsaying that complexity is an integral part of modern era. There is no doubt that people especially young people should have plenty features and characteristics to cope with this complication. In my opinion, the planning and organizing are important features for being successful in each stage of life.

First, these days the great majority of people attach much importance to education. Education system has developed during the centuries and young people have complex and different choices for their major in the university, they should make decision for choosing their best one. However, in the past, there were some limited studying fields. For example, in my country government hold a comprehensive test among young people and they are capable their fields and universities based on their ranks. Therefore, Young people should plan exactly for studying to achieve their favorite major and universities. There is no doubt that education has far-reaching impacts on the young lives and they should have planning and organizing for graduation.

Second, the most of the young people are worried about their future careers and they know that the job market is a more competitive and complicated market these days than past. There are various jobs in market and employers propose highly different salaries. So, young people should make a wise decision for choosing their jobs based on their talents and interests. They should plan some exact steps for being qualified for obtaining high regarding jobs. For example, a person who wants to work in financial markets, besides she should have at least a bachelor degree in finance, she should take some professional certificates. Therefore, she should pass a long and hard way for being a financial analyst. When she is capable to obtain these certificates that she has an exact plan and she implements this plan with discipline. Therefore, young people should have proper plan and organizing for being successful in obtaining job.

Third,These days, people are occupied and they do not have enough time for wasting. They should plan for having good vacation, holidays, trips and etc. In better words, if people especially young people want to enjoy the life, they should be organized. For example, in some specific holidays, all the plane tickets are sold out and people, who want to trip by plane, should cancel their trips. In other words, the great majority of people plan for their holidays to trip, therefore who has no plan, should cope with plenty problems for buying tickets, hotel booking and etc. Hence, young people should be organized for enjoying their lives.

In a nutshell, modern days circumstance imposes its' specific rules and one of the most important rules, is having plan and being organized.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, however, if, regarding, second, so, therefore, third, at least, for example, no doubt, in my opinion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2339.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19777777778 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.599058709 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473333333333 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8854934034 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4583333333 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.79166666667 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219984547081 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837290622799 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045337035145 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148556028086 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389903239122 0.0645574589148 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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