If you want to succeed in the future, you should know how to make a plan now and achieve your goal step by step. I strongly agree that the ability to plan and organize is critical for youngsters in modern life.There are several reasons to back up the statement.
First of all, the pace of modern life becomes faster and faster, which means that things change quickly and if we don't have the ability to plan and organize, we will lose our directions easily and don't know how to do next and even delay our work. For example, my cousin is a bad plan-maker, and when his boss gives some difficult tasks, he can finish the tasks just before the deadline is coming . Thus his boss usually scolds him and he never get promoted.
What's more, the ability to plan and organize will enable you to know what your goal is and how to achieve it. In other words, you split your difficult task into some easier and smaller task and you will have more confidence to achieve it. The person I admire most is my colleague Bob. He is a good plan-maker and he always organize things smoothly and never get puzzled. He seems to handle his work without any difficulty. As a result, he is a manager now ,though he is still in his twenties.
In addition, a good plan-maker makes a best time-saver. In modern society, we seem to have too many things to do and have little time to relax. However, if we have the ability to plan and organize, we can not only finish our daily work but have enough time to hang out for fun. My sister's schedule is really tight, but she never complain the time is not enough.Because she can manage things using her ability to plan and organize.
In a word, the ability is important.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, so, still, thus, for example, in addition, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37579617834 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31922959207 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522292993631 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2836967913 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.875 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234500963494 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731047212516 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599397787648 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131533904262 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492635351408 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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