TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

In the past life was extremely difficult end complex, but in today’s modern life, in 2018, life has been extremely simplified, especially with the advancement of technology. Also, the young people can decide about their future without any problems like as lack of facilities, but in some Asian countries, they have some deride problems which is incomprehensible to developed countries. As an Asian person, I want to explain one of these problems;

First, in countries like IRAN, in spite to have oil and gas, the people are extremely poor, and the economy of the country is very difficult, the poverty level has gone so far and people in south of country doesn’t have water, also the air pollution is so much that they should drain the city. But they do not have any money and the government does not help, in such a situation, life is very difficult for young people to organize their plans of life.

Second, with the development of science in the world, and important inventions that have been made, human life has changed in most parts of the world and is still subject to huge changes, and the best ones who adapted themselves to these conditions are young people, so they can easily think about everything. for example, if they don’t know something they can search it from GOOGLE, Google is one of the best complete sources that all people can use it on the internet.

Third, all the things in the world have advantages and disadvantages thing that depends on the people idea and situations they have. There are more advantages than disadvantages on modern lifestyle: first of all, eating habits and way of talking keep going on changing. People choose the perfect way of speaking and learn to use new languages. the second one, social network made the people to talk, chat, and many other things in their hands by using the devices called mobiles. In the modern life, also, education has developed with the use of internet and humans use different machines for different work. But, it has some important disadvantages too, while people entering into the darker side, due to modern life style, the culture and tradition is fading off. The people are addicted to the new technology and new behavior which may cause to louse their humanity of living, in addition, materials and Machines are getting expensive and all the people cannot to buy the best one.

In conclusion, it just depends on where the young people live, with how much facilities and what culture. I hope that the examples given above have sufficiently expressed my opinion.

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Average: 7.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...they can easily think about everything. for example, if they don't know someth...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...peaking and learn to use new languages. the second one, social network made the peo...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...n where the young people live, with how much facilities and what culture. I hope tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, still, third, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2144.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91743119266 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58842850479 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536697247706 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.8781431155 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.933333333 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0666666667 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212361330104 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753301686269 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540857626426 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120220366206 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373051900779 0.0645574589148 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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