TPO-50 - Independent Writing Task

Studying history courses are integral part of social sciences. However, does studying history is necessary for other fields like engineering, medicine, biology and etc.? In my opinion, the studying history courses should be mandatory for all fields. Since studying history not only it is interesting, but also student can learn a lot about common issues. In addition, students are able to make wise decision for their country future.

First, when people study history, they learn a lot of things about their countries and societies. This is so amazing to know about the past. The great majority of people are interested to know about the story of their country and people. They are curious about their ancestors, governments, kings and etc. They want to know why some famous landmarks like castle, palaces and cities were built. Therefore, taking history courses are so interesting for students.

Second, students can learn plenty things from history, specifically science history. Studying the history of science helps students to know more about scientist and they can learn a lot of things by famous scientists' lives. Studying history helps people to have enough experience for improving in their lives. They know how great scientists worked hard. In result, studying history a good way for training experienced student for societies.

Third, when students study history, they know more about the reasons and consequences of some historical events and they can make decision wisely. For example, when they study about world wars, they become familiar with terrible impacts of wars on humans' lives. They know more about racist and crazy politicians. They understand that country elections are important and they should elect a wise politician. They have enough knowledge that they do not repeat their ancestors' errors. Hence, studying history is a crucial course for students.

In conclusion, although students can spend their time for learning their fields rather history, studying history should be required for students, since they know better about past events and can make wiser decision in present and future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e wiser decision in present and future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38323353293 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47609677815 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491017964072 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5665454836 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1739130435 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5217391304 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30434782609 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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